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After the Funeral

Dusk fell rapidly. Three women dressed in black With their young lanky companion hurried back To their rather small impoverished dark room. Only an oil lamp that added to their gloom. Silence reigned except for the youngest maiden Sobbing, though all were with heavy heart laden. The elder sat on a bed, shedding no tears That man buried was in reality hers. O what a cruel world, how her son suffered! How many times he was so harshly buffered? Religious leaders had him sentenced to death. So crucified was he until his last breath. Generous of Joseph to give him a tomb. Brave Nicodemus but with a face of doom, Provided fresh linen and bought perfumed spice. There they buried the young man from Paradise. Still in the darkness the elder woman sat, No one dared engage her in frivolous chat. No one knew the pain in her much wounded breast, It had began with his treacherous arrest. Still the worst was yet to come when with a lance Checking his death, the Roman saw in a glance. That's when she felt the cruel lance pierce her heart, The young man quickly held her seeing her start. Now on her hard bed she quietly pondered My God Father, what will happen, she wondered. She then knew her mission as God had decreed. On the third day Her dearest Son would be freed.

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Date: 3/28/2021 12:13:00 AM
Wow! Your deep poem captures the pain of Mary so well, beautiful poem, Victor:)
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Date: 3/27/2021 3:42:00 PM
A great post for Easter. WE can imagine her grief. YOu know, I have no idea, but is Easter in March this year?? I need to see the calendar.
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Date: 3/27/2021 8:53:00 AM
This is the perfect Easter poem. It brings the reality to the front and makes it so real for us today. Because it happened so long ago many have allowed it to slip into the stuff of legend. Only for The Believers does it remain fresh and real. Wonderful verse Victor. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/26/2021 1:20:00 PM
I have never read a more awesome magnificent, emotional touching Easter poem - this should be published on Easter Day on the front page of every American Newspaper. A Gem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/26/2021 12:50:00 PM
WoW! Victor, What a well-written interpretation of the first Easter. It was a good reminder of Easter’s origin. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/26/2021 11:17:00 AM
Your story of the first Easter is so beautifully expressed, Victor. The triumph after great suffering is the joy of Easter. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 3/26/2021 10:41:00 AM
What a beautiful interpretation of that first Easter morning so long ago, Victor. Thank you for this reminder. An uplifting poem that showcases your faith! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/26/2021 9:00:00 AM
I can't imagine what any of the close followers and His family went through on that horrible day but the joy that came when He arose and appeared to them once again must have healed all the brokenness they were feeling at the time of the His death. It is so good to live today and know the true ending of the story. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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Date: 3/26/2021 6:16:00 AM
Such a touching story with a positive ending... So beautifully conveyed...
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Date: 3/26/2021 2:59:00 AM
You told the story of Easter well in your verse Victor. We look forward to next week to celebrate the resurrection. Tom
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Date: 3/25/2021 7:39:00 PM
Victor, what a beautiful retelling of the Easter story! I especially like that it was told from Mary's perspective. Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/25/2021 6:15:00 PM
You've rewritten a well known story with a fresh pen. Well done Victor.
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Date: 3/25/2021 4:40:00 PM
Great flowing rhyme story , Victor, so well said for Easter. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/25/2021 4:23:00 PM
Wonderful write told in poetic form. Hugs
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Date: 3/25/2021 3:19:00 PM
A precious write, Victor, that celebrates faith. Many will find enlightenment in recalling those events --etched in their hearts. Aptly done!
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Date: 3/25/2021 2:40:00 PM
- Impressively written, Victor ... I think most people will be touched by reading it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/25/2021 2:38:00 PM
A wonderful poem for Easter. You tell the story well, Victor. Hope you're having a wonderful week :)
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Date: 3/25/2021 1:56:00 PM
So touching imaging scenes Victor, a wonderful poem from top to bottom, bets wishes..//Las
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Date: 3/25/2021 1:48:00 PM
a super poem very poignant with Easter rapidly approaching, well penned Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
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