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After the Fall

Rain- a welcome to hibernating skin . . a Southern accent can melt snow from the highest mountain in the wind, a voice carries, alone and waiting You could be secure in warmth yet, a chill invades and you allow its touch to take hold I am aware that you are capable of being the rush of freedom, as quivering lips thirst for adventure - frost has chosen its path As my entire being trembles, while feeling a liquid lullaby lingering lightly along the skin I realize in that moment, feeling is after the fall ____________________ ~ Just a little scribble ~

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Running Wolves

Date: 1/16/2020 9:12:00 AM

aye lass how long it's been... how I yearn for the comfort of a southern accent... so sweetly musical... warm and inviting... respectable charm... aye this cursed frost wrapped round me heart... weight of the world it is... seemingly... no escape... how I yearn for the freedom... of the southern accents laughter... once again...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/16/2020 10:03:00 PM

:) Smiling at your thoughts. I do have a Southern accent. Being from the South. Thank you for reading this little scribble of mine. Thank you for being here, for being You. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 1/26/2019 9:11:00 AM

Rain is mercy in so many ways...Such a lovely scribble Brandy...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/26/2019 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. The rain holds many moments indeed, as emotions linger. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/26/2019 4:56:00 AM

Hi Brandy, this is one beautiful scribble Brandy. Your wonderful lines paint such vivid imagery, a living canvas in the mind. In a piece of so many beautiful lines, I wouldn't want to pick out a few as standouts, because the whole piece is a standout. A poetic gem, an excellent write. A Fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/26/2019 1:20:00 PM

Thank you Mike! I appreciate your thoughts. It is very kind of you to place this in your favorites. :) Your lovely comment brings a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 1/25/2019 10:48:00 AM

I beautiful scribble, Brandy, I like "the rush of freedom as quivering lips thirst for adventure." Thank you for sharing this. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/25/2019 7:38:00 PM

Thank you John. Yes, the rush of freedom is amazing. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 1/25/2019 8:57:00 AM

"Quivering lips thirst for adventure"..Beautiful write Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/25/2019 7:36:00 PM

Yes, indeed!!! And, adventure they shall find. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you Joseph. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/25/2019 7:23:00 AM

Every stanza unfolds a feeling..reaching..and achieving. A lovely romantic write, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/25/2019 7:25:00 PM

Your thoughts are always appreciated. Your support. That feeling of reaching is in this, yet a magnetic pull as well. Succeeding. Yes!! Thank you Vijay for your kind words. :) Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/25/2019 1:57:00 AM

Exquisitely done, powerfully poetic.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/25/2019 7:09:00 PM

Thank you Caren. Your thoughts are appreciated. You are a very talented writer. May your ink always caress the page. :) Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 1/24/2019 11:08:00 PM

'...frost has chosen its path...' I love that line... all very beautifully written, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/25/2019 7:03:00 PM

Yes, when frost makes it way- in moments like this. Rain has an icy chill. Thank you Lawrence. It is very kind of you to say that you love that line. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy