Valsa George Poet Limerick

After the Booze

He went home gaily after a few pegs
Fell onto his bed dangling his soiled legs
Blissfully fell asleep soon
His wife came calling him “loon”
Falling from bed, he felt her hefty kicks


May.19. 2023

Funny, Bawdy or Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

10 syllables in lines 1, 2 and 5
7 syllables in lines 3 and 4

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Sara Kendrick July 1, 2023 at 12:12 PM Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sad situation that both of them are in, pity he can't join AA and her al-anon. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Eve Roper June 27, 2023 at 4:15 PM Good one, great Limerick.

Yann Rolland May 20, 2023 at 8:33 PM it recalls me my youth, booze made me sick, so much that i stop, excellent and dissuasive poem, GL for the contest

Bill Baker May 20, 2023 at 12:09 PM Made me smile, so good Limerick, Valsa! Good luck in the contest my dear friend. Bill

Sotto Poet May 20, 2023 at 8:54 AM It's quite amusing. I wanted to thank you for the smile and wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Victor Buhagiar May 20, 2023 at 1:58 AM Quite funny, dear Valsa. Best for a win.

Timothy Ray May 19, 2023 at 4:37 PM good for a chuckle or two....and made me happy such is no longer part of my life...thanks for the smile

Paige Hind May 19, 2023 at 10:56 AM Hey, this made me laugh! I liked it.

Alexis Y. May 19, 2023 at 6:27 AM Lol! Valsa, He'll probably think twice about how much he drinks. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend;-) Alexis

Victor Buhagiar May 19, 2023 at 12:50 AM Serves him right. really.