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After the Birds

Yes, her hair was looking great; she'd spent so long on getting ready for this longed for day - the seaside with her boyfriend. She stepped outside the beach hut, her love knelt, a ring held out - and a flock of seagulls pooped! written 18th July for Nette's 'After' contest

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Date: 7/19/2025 4:52:00 AM
Ah aw seagulls can ruin beach time , this is a super poem , fun mixed with humour. Kudos! Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
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Date: 7/18/2025 10:06:00 PM
Hilarious, Jack
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Date: 7/18/2025 10:04:00 AM
This one made me laugh. I was sitting on the deck and a seagull flew by and pooped down my shirt. My friends said that means luck. I think not. Enjoyed. love phyl
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Date: 7/18/2025 9:33:00 AM
Creative one. What a way to end the story. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 7/18/2025 9:20:00 AM
Lol, what a shock, moral of the story, always have an umbrella handy. Tom
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