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"From deep within my heart I always catch the scent of my Beloved. How can I help but follow that fragrance?" By Rumi https://spiritualgal.files.wordpress.com/2017/09/img_9903.png?w=293 AFTER LIFE Her scent! Her scent! The best of life! I watch her move - the smile, the curves. Sixty-one years she’d been my wife. The light projects - my mind observes. Perfume, present, in our sweet home. Doesn’t rise, though coaxed, from purple urn. T’her closet clings, like honeycomb, The pleasant scent of clothes well worn. If I could, but, follow the trail And find her form in great beyond, Upon her shoulder, lay, inhale, My darling, court, renew our bond. Her scent! Her scent! The best of life! Her pulse, unique, as is my grief. Sixty-one years she’d been my wife. And when you’ve loved as I…so brief. 7/13/2022 Rhyme Rumi Quote Sponsor: Sotto Poet Rhymezone and howmanysyllables.com 8 syllables per line 109 words

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/17/2024 7:06:00 PM

"And when you’ve loved as I…so brief." I loved that. Beautiful writing, Kim. <3

Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2022 2:04:00 PM

Kim, so beautifully penned, I love your poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2022 6:25:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2022 2:33:00 PM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Love your ending. Years go by so very fast. Today, be blessed with your wonderful win...........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2022 8:10:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2022 10:06:00 PM

Oh my Kim, this marvelous poem is one of your best in my humble opinion! I simply loved every line. It is going straight into my Faves! Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win that is so deserving. Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2022 5:16:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie! It was relating to my Dad’s grief for mom. Hugs ~ Kim

Valsa George

Date: 7/14/2022 6:44:00 AM

"If I could, but, follow the trail And find her form in great beyond, Upon her shoulder, lay, inhale, My darling, court, renew our bond".... Simply brilliant ! Win big....Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2022 12:16:00 PM

Thank you, my sweet friend! <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/13/2022 7:28:00 PM

This gem sparkles from the first to the last word, Kim. Really well-done. A big WOW! ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2022 5:49:00 AM

Thank you so much! I sent to my Dad and he liked it. I don’t send him much of what I write about his (and my) grief but I thought he would like this one. God bless you, Gershon!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 7/13/2022 3:21:00 PM

that's a poem, there. Well done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 6:43:00 PM

Thank you, Jeff!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/13/2022 2:09:00 PM

Best wishes Km! Awesome write, Love, Panagiota xxx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 6:43:00 PM

Thank you, Pangie!

Alkas Poetry

Date: 7/13/2022 1:53:00 PM

Emotionally beautiful... A poetry with a soul full of feelings, a brilliant poem that moves by the substantiality OF A BEAUTIFUL POETIC SOUL! SALUTE, ALKAS

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 6:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear friend!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/13/2022 8:37:00 AM

Brilliant, Loved the style with it's repetitions. A lively and beautiful poem. Hugs. xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 9:31:00 AM

Thank you so much! Hugs ~ Kim

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2022 8:00:00 AM

The great beyond fascinates the soul which loves to roam the plains of oblivion in search of soulmates! Wonderfully done, my dearest, Kim. Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2022 9:31:00 AM

Thank you so much! I was hoping you would read this one! Hugs and blessings ~ Kim