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After Forever

Until eternity becomes whatever it may be, may we drift off into love’s abyss together- I vowed to love you through holy matrimony, for you will be mine, long after forever, and we shall part ways in faith, never, no never. When time becomes a dust particle of coal, and when absoluteness becomes caught- You shall be in the depths of the depth of my soul, because after forever shall always be sought. Never, no never can this love be bought. Sanctity and wholeness are we until death, even after that I shall love you in resurrection- And when the time comes for my final breath, we shall still endure a special connection. We are love and passion combined; perfection. Lovers in body, soul and mind in endless guarantee, promises to link in undying laughter not hate- Covenant with permanent glue with security, this compassion and perpetual love we did create- for after forever shall be our immortal fate. December 20, 2017

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Date: 11/10/2018 10:24:00 AM
Hi Luloo, dropping by with my congratulations on your win in the contest, much deserved my friend. have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 12/24/2017 6:19:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Luloo, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 12/23/2017 7:37:00 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats
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Date: 12/22/2017 10:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Laura. Well done.
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Date: 12/22/2017 10:07:00 PM
Back with congratulations lovely! :) xomo
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Date: 12/22/2017 9:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 12/22/2017 5:59:00 PM
A poetic dance around the altar of love. Beautifully penned Laura. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 12/21/2017 9:29:00 AM
So nicely penned.I am touched. Eternal love will last after forever. Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/20/2017 3:25:00 PM
Love last through eternity...A lovely write Luloo
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Date: 12/20/2017 2:51:00 PM
- I really enjoy this delicious poem, Laura - If "after forever" will be as you described ... we have nothing to fear :) - Luck in the contest :) - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2017 12:46:00 PM
WoW! Laura, I really enjoyed your take on the contest theme. What a powerful and heartfelt "love" to have. Can a love like you so skillfully penned just simply end? I doubt it, for it will go on and on. In my eyes its a winner. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/20/2017 11:31:00 AM
Dreamy Love! Elegant eloquent penning :) my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Date: 12/20/2017 11:33:00 AM
thank you sweet and kind Maureen :) -luloo
Date: 12/20/2017 11:12:00 AM
So wonderful! Best for a win!
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Date: 12/20/2017 11:33:00 AM
thank you dear Kim :) You are always so kind :) -luloo
Date: 12/20/2017 10:46:00 AM
A wonderful read, touching and dramatically done - I enjoyed very much! Merry Christmas, Laura - I hope you make and keep precious Christmas memories. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 12/20/2017 11:33:00 AM
thank you sweet Cay Cay :) You too, may your Christmas be filled with gratitude and joy! :)-luloo

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