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After Forever

With Big Bang flash, our Universe was spun,
     exploding with a force that quickly spread.
          Now, science does predict oblivion
when all the energy of stars is dead.

Just half of all these energies remain
     of what there was two billion years ago.
          Two-hundred thousand galaxies now wane
with weakness of that surge which feeds their flow.

Survival of all living forms is moot,
     for these evolved from Big Bang cosmic brew.
          And in the end, the only absolute...
oblivion, the final stage...adieu.
    
Where stars and planets whirl in bright array,
                  the darkest, black oblivion will splay.


December 8, 2015

~2nd Place~
Contest: After Forever
Sponsor: John Lawless
Judged: 12/22/2017

~2nd Place~
Contest: Oblivion
Sponsor: Rob Carmack
Judged: 12/19/2015
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Krampe Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:15 PM
I love your take on the contest prompt, Sandra. It will be a very long time until the final oblivion :) Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:30 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 6:45 AM
A sad write! Congrats on your win Sandra!
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:30 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Babbit Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Congrats Sandra, TY for the glimpse to tne end of time.
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:06 PM
Beautiful journey out in the galaxies. Well done and congrats on your win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thank you so much, Line. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fantastic piece! Blessings xomo
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:28 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen. I appreciate your visits and lovely comments! Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 5:39 PM
An edgy scientific Sonnet...quite a unique take on the theme, Sandra. Well done and thanks for participating in the contest
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Thank you for the great contest theme, John, and for my nice placement. Happy New Year to you! Sandra
Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Sorry that I previously missed replying to this contest being finished. Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Robert, thank you so much for all your positive and supportive comments on my poems. This is such a busy time of year, and still you find the time to be so supportive. Much appreciated for sure. Hope you had a wonderful and blessed Christmas Day. Sandra "
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December 20, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Sandra, Congrats on your win In Rob Carmack's Oblivion contest. Love ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 9:41 PM
Hi Linda, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 9:31 PM
Congratulations on 2nd place win. I found this to be a fascinating poem and very creative, with truth mixed in. Great job!
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 9:41 PM
Hi Susan, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 2:24 PM
SANDRA, Congrats on your Oblivion WIN **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 9:41 PM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 11:58 AM
Congrats Sandra on your well deserved win..Be blessed! -lloo *smiles*
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 9:41 PM
Hi Laura, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Oh, did I enjoy this write, Sandra. Congratulations on your win ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 9:40 PM
Thank you so much, CayCay. Hugs, Sandra
Rv Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 9:55 AM
This is so so amazing, dear Sandra!! Hope it wins!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Hi Sneha, I appreciate your stopping by with your supportive comment and best wishes. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:15 PM
This is an outstanding entry Sandra! I felt transported! #7
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Hi Connie, thank you for stopping by with your nice comment and supportive 7. I appreciate your visits so much. Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Very nice Sandra should do well in contest.
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Thank you, John. Hope it's not too dark. But it's based on truth...not in our time, however. Sandra
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