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After a Long Time

once up on a time i lived here standing on the same ant hill years after after a long time still i smell the same flower still i touch the same rivulet still i feel the same love thank you friends for being a part of me...

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/17/2016 8:43:00 AM

Beautifully painted being part of a loving circle growing as friends excellent piece wishing you a blessed week

Parray Shahid

Date: 2/2/2016 3:06:00 AM

Try skipping the articles. Nice, Though :).

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 2/3/2016 3:53:00 AM

;) will try

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2016 3:45:00 PM

oh, who are you?? Bet it's someone I used to know pretty well???

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/25/2016 10:41:00 PM

:)) I am punnia...have took part in one of your contests..it was a nice experience even though I didn't get placed :)) Thank you..God bless

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/25/2016 9:59:00 AM

once upon a time....an experience entered my mind....it had remnants of something silly....but, truth be told, it was Beautiful really....because in all things done, the heart was in the midst....making for an experience I am glad my Life didn't miss....wonderful as ever my friend....;)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/25/2016 10:39:00 PM

WOW....that's so sweet and kind of you Eric :)) Missed you these past few days :(( I was really busy with many things o.O How are you doing?Sending love and prayers :)) Take care.....How's your health and arms?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2016 4:02:00 AM

- Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/25/2016 9:52:00 AM

Thank you Anne..hugs..:))