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After a Long Time

once up on a time
i lived here
standing on the same ant hill
years after
after a long time
still i smell the same flower
still i touch the same rivulet
still i feel the same love
thank you friends for being a part of me...

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Liam Mcdaid

February 17, 2016 at 8:43 AM

Beautifully painted being part of a loving circle growing as friends excellent piece wishing you a blessed week

Parray Shahid

February 2, 2016 at 3:06 AM

Try skipping the articles. Nice, Though :).

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

February 3, 2016 at 3:53 AM

;) will try

Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2016 at 3:45 PM

oh, who are you?? Bet it's someone I used to know pretty well???

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

January 25, 2016 at 10:41 PM

:)) I am punnia...have took part in one of your contests..it was a nice experience even though I didn't get placed :)) Thank you..God bless

Eric Boddie

January 25, 2016 at 9:59 AM

once upon a time....an experience entered my mind....it had remnants of something silly....but, truth be told, it was Beautiful really....because in all things done, the heart was in the midst....making for an experience I am glad my Life didn't miss....wonderful as ever my friend....;)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

January 25, 2016 at 10:39 PM

WOW....that's so sweet and kind of you Eric :)) Missed you these past few days :(( I was really busy with many things o.O How are you doing?Sending love and prayers :)) Take care.....How's your health and arms?