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Affections

You affect my heart so deeply
Oh, what an effect you have on me
Today, you make me glad
Yesterday, you made me sad
Tomorrow, what effect will you have on me?
My heart is longing for painless affection

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Date: 10/2/2017 9:08:00 PM
I can relate to this one well, Karen. Yes, some of us have hearts that are really open to the influence of a loved one. Great write...painless affection...that last line is gold.
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 10/4/2017 5:40:00 PM
I am really glad to hear that you relate, Eileen. I must say that poetry really connects people. Thank you for those comments. I really appreciate your comments.
Date: 9/29/2017 9:29:00 AM
This could be any close relationship where we dare to be vulnerable! Thank you for reading my poem, too.
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 10/1/2017 8:35:00 PM
Hi, Sunlite, that is indeed a fact. Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 9/27/2017 9:54:00 AM
Love is indeed a mystery it has so much power! Lovely poem Karen! Glad to have discovered your poetry
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 10/1/2017 8:34:00 PM
It is... and we continue to learn about this mysterious thing called love. Thank you for your comments...I appreciate the discovery :)!
Date: 9/26/2017 8:50:00 AM
Again...another nice little collection of lines; you commit your brief and inner thoughts so very well when laying down on paper - excellent! Cheers - Karen! :) john
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 9/26/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you! I really appreciate the comments...I love to express myself through poetry. I think it is an excellent method of self-expression....
Date: 9/24/2017 6:40:00 PM
Remember the one who loves should have love in return. Nice poem to read.
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 9/25/2017 7:25:00 PM
Definitely. Thank you for your kind comments
Date: 9/24/2017 2:28:00 PM
Hello Karen, nice to meet you.It sounds to me that you are in love. Yes this poem is well written. have a nice day my friend.
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 9/25/2017 7:27:00 PM
Nice to meet you too.Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 9/17/2017 4:43:00 PM
Wonderful write, my friend. Don't stop. Love is patient, Love is kind. . . James
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:07:00 PM
Thanks Jan...Love is certainly elusive...
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:00:00 PM
Unfortunately the path of love rarely runs smoothly it does have its ups and downs:-) enjoyed your poem Karen:-) hugs jan xx
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