Affairs of State

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This monorhyme is actually a set of triplets, written like footles.

Pralines for queens are green Most teens in jeans are lean If queens eat zinc pralines Will teens in jeans be seen

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David Fisher

Date: 9/12/2023 4:56:00 PM

Yes, if you know what I mean. Fun bit of rhyming with these.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/12/2023 8:06:00 PM

Yes! I know what you mean if you know what I mean. ~ Mean Joe Greene

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/12/2023 10:22:00 AM

Cute little triplets gw! laf :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/12/2023 8:08:00 PM

Cute as buttons!

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/11/2023 5:30:00 PM

A fine use of monorhyme dear friend. It gave me a little chuckle. Thanks GW

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/10/2023 9:24:00 PM

I love mono rhymes Good one GoodNight G. Soupmail for you….when was mail ever made of soup? Nuts! A bizarre concept and loathe the..I am not a robot! Robots do not Payfor membership nor buy those Anthologies , nor many are confronted with ads, etc. Pangiella Isle of Capri

John Lawless
Date: 9/11/2023 7:18:00 AM

Careful Pangie, the algorithm is listening.....

Fire Bird

Date: 9/10/2023 8:56:00 PM

Interesting poem, I like it, great job!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2023 7:08:00 PM

Phoenix, so glad you like it. Pop some pralines tonight! :) gw