Advice Take It Or Leave It

I once had a girlfriend to say.
Advice I can give you today.
   Don't linger inside.
   Take me for a ride.
And I'll do the same, let's go play!


For "A Fly on the Wall Contest"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations Jimmy on your win in Michael J. Falotico's contest "A Fly On The Wall". Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 1:19 PM
Congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great write.
Calhoun Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Hi Jimmy - Congratulations on your WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC
K. Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 2:00 AM
Sound advice! Congrats on your win, Jimmy!
Mehta Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 4:08 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Jimmy
Dufresne Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 5:41 PM
congratsw on your win Jimmy!
Taylor Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 3:46 PM
Congrats, Jimmy. Well deserved win. Nice going. Ralph
Devonshire Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Jimmy, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Congrats Jimmy !!! thank you for suporting my first contest..
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 2:35 PM
Big congrats Jimmy on your super win in Michael's first contest with this terrific write and entry ... enjoy another chart topper ..with luv..
L Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 8:16 AM
I can identify with that good write
Arnott Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 8:13 AM
i see ur message thru rythm i hear u but at the same time i fear u for true love may find im frozen dont kno what to do
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 11:44 PM
I enjoyed your limerick today, Jimmy. Best of luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Fine Limerick on the theme of the contest, Jimmy
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 3:53 PM
Good luck in the contest with this winners' circle material..Sara
Wilson Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 2:08 PM
very clever Jimmy Good luck in Michael's contest! love,Deb
Haick Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Best of luck in Michael's "A Fly on the Wall Contest", JAM. Love, Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Very cute Jimmy.. if for the contest ..good luck with luv..
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