Advents a Door

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*Image of Rose & Ring by Amazon.com Advents A Door Sweet be the fragrance of a rose bouquet that passes a nose which hungers after Assured vow of a fond scent A steady pace of careful steps using the heart to guide eternalize reciting words ennobled within the eyes Advent, whereto, the velvet case Parts a smile for whence 'tis seen look to heaven, cheers felt now fronts a door, hand lift a heart-beats away at wood Open, hugs, echoed words, Oh yes! 2019 May 21 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND Vers Libre ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 07

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/21/2019 8:15:00 PM

Wonderful! Beautiful images; creative turns of phrase. Bravo, William! Best wishes, Gershon

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/21/2019 9:15:00 PM

Whoa, a litany of praise, whereto, I am humbled--hearts bound for Chicago GW, Aloha wk