William Kelii Kekaula Poet Free verse

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Advents a Door

*Image of Rose & Ring by Amazon.com

Advents A Door

Sweet be the fragrance
          of a rose bouquet
          that passes a nose
          which hungers after
Assured vow of a fond scent

A steady pace of careful steps
          using the heart to guide
          eternalize reciting words
          ennobled within the eyes
Advent, whereto, the velvet case

Parts a smile for whence 'tis seen
          look to heaven, cheers felt
          now fronts a door, hand lift
          a heart-beats away at wood
Open, hugs, echoed words, Oh yes!

2019 May 21
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND Vers Libre
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 07

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Gershon Wolf May 21, 2019 at 8:15 PM Wonderful! Beautiful images; creative turns of phrase. Bravo, William! Best wishes, Gershon William Kelii Kekaula May 21, 2019 at 9:15 PM Whoa, a litany of praise, whereto, I am humbled--hearts bound for Chicago GW, Aloha wk