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Adrift With the Moon

Oh moon, with your many moods, your beauty woos me, as you wax and wane majestic. Your mesmerizing call awakens my heart, as you carry me away like the tides that ebb and flow along your shimmery pathways. Where you go, I will follow, guided by a spirit of wanderlust to distant lands and seas, navigating by the stars alone. For I am captivated by your beauty as I hear your siren song calling an enchanting, haunting melody too powerful to resist. My heart is moonstruck away I go, adrift and wandering until I meet you face to face forever I will roam. Written on 5/3/2015

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/26/2016 1:12:00 PM

Laura, I adore well written poems like this that honor the moon and her power over us. This is really beautiful! I am faving it! Congratulations on your great deserving second place win! 7 ; )

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/31/2016 3:56:00 PM

Thanks so much, Connie, for your kind comments! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2016 1:23:00 PM

Thanks so much, Connie, for your kind comments! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/26/2016 8:26:00 AM

Congrats Laura, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2016 1:27:00 PM

Thank you, Teddy, for your kind comments :)

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 7/26/2016 7:47:00 AM

And we are captivated by the beauty of this magical piece. Congratulations!

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2016 9:55:00 AM

Thank you, Dineen! Glad you enjoyed my poem:)

Lu Loo

Date: 7/25/2016 8:06:00 PM

Laura, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/25/2016 11:56:00 PM

Thank you, Laura Loo :)

Parray Shahid

Date: 1/4/2016 7:56:00 PM

O Moon! Thy love for me brings, A world beyond consciousness; And swooningly infallible. ......... Beautifully constructed Laura

Skat A

Date: 6/10/2015 12:50:00 AM

Laura, Congratulations, on your win. ThanXs for supporting my MooN contest. GoodNight **SKAT**

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/10/2015 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Skat, for the placement and I enjoyed your contest very much!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/2/2015 8:04:00 AM

Lovely piece!

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/2/2015 10:18:00 AM

Thank you, Richard! I've always loved looking at the moon, especially when it's light shimmers over the water :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/23/2015 8:57:00 AM

gorgeous poem Laura what a tribute to our lovely moon I am always in awe and enthralled by her. I have used her on the cover of my soon to be released book "Wistful Thoughts" hugs 7 + fav

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/23/2015 10:56:00 AM

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Shadow! I obviously love the moon, as well. So happy you will be releasing your book soon! Thanks again for your kind compliments and encouraging words :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/20/2015 7:26:00 AM

Excellent write laura, I like your poem, flow with vivid imagery..............);Afolabi.

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/20/2015 12:01:00 PM

Thank you, Afolabi, for your kind comments! I appreciate it :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/17/2015 7:35:00 PM

ummm I was sure I commented before, I loved this!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/17/2015 10:23:00 PM

Thank you, Arthur. I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/7/2015 11:15:00 AM

Powerful images of moon, our sister so close to us and so distant at the same time, a 7

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/17/2015 10:26:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments and rating, too, Mario! :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/6/2015 5:02:00 PM

Laura, oh how beautifully you have written, lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my poem springtime flowers

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/6/2015 7:04:00 PM

Why, thank you, Broken Wings (what is your real name, if I can ask?) I really appreciate your high marks and comments from you :)

Vincent Flannery

Date: 5/6/2015 2:28:00 PM

I love this poem. Each morning I look to see the moon. Such an integral part to earth's survival. Yet so simple in it's beauty. Great write Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/6/2015 2:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vincent! Your comments are appreciated. I do love the beauty seen in our Lord's great creation and like to write about it, too :)

Hannington Mumo

Date: 5/5/2015 10:46:00 AM

Well-written. Keep it up. 7+++!

Hannington Mumo
Date: 5/6/2015 1:19:00 AM

You do not have to worry dear. I perfectly understand. And again, I like your titillating pieces. As I say, a 7+++ is not even enough!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/5/2015 10:48:00 AM

Sorry, I put the wrong reply on your site, Hannington. You are also a talented poet. Thanks for stopping by and giving me such a good rating :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/5/2015 10:46:00 AM

And I can say the same for you, Emile! You have such a lovely way with words as well. So glad I'm exposed to such talented poets such as yourself :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/5/2015 7:46:00 AM

You paint a picture with words that brings your vision alive in the reader’s mind, and we too can appreciate your world filled with a poet’s imagination. Emile.

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/5/2015 10:47:00 AM

And I can say the same for you, Emile! You have such a lovely way with words as well. So glad I'm exposed to such talented poets such as yourself!

James Horn

Date: 5/4/2015 7:01:00 PM

Laura, The full moon in Wilmington over the ocean and at Space Needle in Seattle were totally awesome. Watched moon and through hair I ran a comb, while seeing it continue across the sky to roam. I always wondered what the face in the moon was trying to say or sing. Jim Horn

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/4/2015 10:11:00 PM

You put a small poem in your comment, Jim! I like that :) Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate it!

Lucy Pine

Date: 5/4/2015 4:53:00 PM

Touching poem Laura. I can sense a beautiful aura...

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/4/2015 5:22:00 PM

Thank you, Lucy. I appreciate your kind words:)