Adrift In Severed Agony



That disheartening obsession
is detached from reality
Another retinal wink message
blinks SOS pillow bleak

Drifting off to sleep,
void dreams of awakened passion
falls into an impotent abyss
The empty anesthesia bottle,
caressed by a pained heaving chest,
has swallowed all of yesterday’s sorrow

But, tomorrow’s groping mope
is gonna need another icy liquid borrow
As more orbital messages
get sent in all sizes and shape bottles

Laying on a synthetic cool waterbed float,
adrift in severed agony
A volcanic wave of unprompted lava tears
gushes up from deep below

There’s a capsized, fragile heart breaking apart,
upon a sea of cantina glass ...
from a shattered, sigh low expectation ceiling

Unnoticed affection ... fractured hope of so many
phantom romantic daydreams scattering 
Fragments of jagged, jilted pride — 
an unrequited wrist of scarred coping

Adrift in severed agony ... such a turbulent flow
Pick up the pieces of a broken, unspoken hello
Severed agony tales spin hollow 

Still cracked hope must keep that mirror facade, 
aloof happy smile appearance together ...
for the sake of the next café parked shooting star
Whose unaware that they’re in need 
of a dear fatal attraction follow

Transfixed lonely cries,
of shadow watcher eyes ...
with a tearful, splintering glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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