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Adrift

All these lonely people secluded drifting in parallel worlds of isolation that never intersect If only they could find each other somehow converge and burst the bubbles of separation Living in unrelated universes of emptiness find ways to heal each other within their surreal nothingness fixated on the past stop choosing to ignore the whole big world If all the lonely people got together they could abolish loneliness they would they could they should AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on January 11, 2019

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Date: 1/18/2019 10:11:00 PM
Wonderfully written, a fav for me. These things you write of are so true. I was hearing Paul McCartney signing "Eleanor Rigby" as I read this fantastic poem.
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Date: 1/18/2019 11:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Timothy.
Date: 1/12/2019 7:10:00 AM
Loneliness is blinding; they may need a bit of help.
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Date: 1/12/2019 7:12:00 AM
So true, it's sad.
Date: 1/11/2019 8:50:00 PM
souls transfixed on a blue light screen...seeking salve-ation
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Date: 1/11/2019 9:51:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
Date: 1/11/2019 8:01:00 PM
This was an instant FAV! I was feeling this way earlier today... and you have expressed it so beautifully! ;)
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Date: 1/11/2019 8:23:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and most appreciated comment, Rhona.

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