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Adorable Angel

Aged Agatha
loved listening to
Christmas carol concerts.
Agatha always attended 
her grand daughter Grace’s
nativity at her nursery.
Grace’s mummy Marie
always went with Agatha,
describing in detail
how gorgeous Grace looked 
dressed in wonderful winter white
with a glistening gold halo
and tinsel wrapped wire wings.
Sadly old age had taken its toll
and Agatha was almost blind
so she could only visualise
what an adorable angel Grace made

''A'' Forms, New Poems, 10 or more lines Poetry Contest


Sponsored by Constance La France

12/21/21

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Constance La France December 31, 2021 at 4:33 PM Jan, congratulations on your Second Place win in my "A" Forms Contest with this lovely poem ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Paula Goldsmith December 24, 2021 at 6:43 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Adorable angel" write/picture are adorable. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Andrea Dietrich December 23, 2021 at 10:38 AM Big congrats, sweet Jan. How is your Christmas all coming together?

Alexis Y. December 23, 2021 at 9:13 AM Hi Jan, I'm just coming to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex December 23, 2021 at 4:31 AM Great writing on Adorable angel. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Delice Arleen Skelly December 23, 2021 at 2:58 AM This takes me back years to the nativity plays the family were involved in. Such happy times...Delice

Mystic Rose Rose December 22, 2021 at 2:29 PM Angels remain adorable at any age Jan, lovely write, gl in the contest, all the best :)

Rico Leffanta December 22, 2021 at 10:24 AM Memories tend to enhance with time, so Grace will appear more stunning than eyes could see . . . .Enjoyed, Jan!

Victor Buhagiar December 22, 2021 at 2:04 AM Loved your angelic poem. Sometimes I miss you not coming to Malta, but here the pandemic is increasing again. Happy Yuletide greetings xx

Tom Cunningham December 22, 2021 at 1:19 AM We have to make the most of life whilst we have good health and create wonderful memories that we can look back on. Hope you're on the road to recovery now Jan Merry Christmas. Tom

Michael Tor December 21, 2021 at 6:43 PM Wonderful piece Jan, so happy your back. Have a joyful Christmas and God bless you...

Alexis Y. December 21, 2021 at 4:14 PM Hi Jan, You have penned such a heartfelt entry for the contest. You did a good job. Best wishes in the contest. Happy Holidays my friend:-) Alexis Jan Allison December 21, 2021 at 4:55 PM Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Debra L Brown December 21, 2021 at 3:20 PM A heart felt poem....Christmas Blessings ~ Debra Jan Allison December 21, 2021 at 3:25 PM thanks Debra, I used to love going to my son's nativity when he was small and try to go to carols by candle light (well battery operated faux candles) every year:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan December 21, 2021 at 2:26 PM She doesn’t need to see her grandchild to know how beautiful she is. She sees her in her mind’s eye as an angel every day. Sweet write ,Jan. Jan Allison December 21, 2021 at 3:17 PM Thanks Jenna I do hope Constance likes this one:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh December 21, 2021 at 1:32 PM The vicarious side of life, is so well captured here Jan, in a very touching beautiful poem, cheers David David Kavanagh December 21, 2021 at 3:49 PM Decent poetry Jan you wrote the book Don’t ever doubt yourself Jan Allison December 21, 2021 at 3:16 PM thanks David I do write some decent poetry at times:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2021 at 1:02 PM - She made is beautiful picture of her angel ... sad she could not see - A lovely poem, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Hope everything is well with you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison December 21, 2021 at 3:15 PM thanks Anne Lise I am still struggling with covid tiredness and now have a gift from hubby - his cold lol, hope all is good with you and your lovely hubby:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 21, 2021 at 12:20 PM this is precious, jan!!! GREAT Christmas post. Jan Allison December 21, 2021 at 12:57 PM Proof I'm not just a poop poet lol:-) I do hope Constance likes it , it was fun to write an emotional piece:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer December 21, 2021 at 12:18 PM very touching, jan! Jan Allison December 21, 2021 at 12:56 PM thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin December 21, 2021 at 12:13 PM Well done my friend! Jan Allison December 21, 2021 at 12:14 PM Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx