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Aged Agatha loved listening to Christmas carol concerts. Agatha always attended her grand daughter Grace’s nativity at her nursery. Grace’s mummy Marie always went with Agatha, describing in detail how gorgeous Grace looked dressed in wonderful winter white with a glistening gold halo and tinsel wrapped wire wings. Sadly old age had taken its toll and Agatha was almost blind so she could only visualise what an adorable angel Grace made ''A'' Forms, New Poems, 10 or more lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 12/21/21

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Constance La France

Date: 12/31/2021 4:33:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your Second Place win in my "A" Forms Contest with this lovely poem ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/24/2021 6:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Adorable angel" write/picture are adorable. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2021 10:38:00 AM

Big congrats, sweet Jan. How is your Christmas all coming together?

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/23/2021 9:13:00 AM

Hi Jan, I'm just coming to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/23/2021 4:31:00 AM

Great writing on Adorable angel. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/23/2021 2:58:00 AM

This takes me back years to the nativity plays the family were involved in. Such happy times...Delice

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/22/2021 2:29:00 PM

Angels remain adorable at any age Jan, lovely write, gl in the contest, all the best :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/22/2021 10:24:00 AM

Memories tend to enhance with time, so Grace will appear more stunning than eyes could see . . . .Enjoyed, Jan!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/22/2021 2:04:00 AM

Loved your angelic poem. Sometimes I miss you not coming to Malta, but here the pandemic is increasing again. Happy Yuletide greetings xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/22/2021 1:19:00 AM

We have to make the most of life whilst we have good health and create wonderful memories that we can look back on. Hope you're on the road to recovery now Jan Merry Christmas. Tom

Michael Tor

Date: 12/21/2021 6:43:00 PM

Wonderful piece Jan, so happy your back. Have a joyful Christmas and God bless you...

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/21/2021 4:14:00 PM

Hi Jan, You have penned such a heartfelt entry for the contest. You did a good job. Best wishes in the contest. Happy Holidays my friend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2021 4:55:00 PM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/21/2021 3:20:00 PM

A heart felt poem....Christmas Blessings ~ Debra

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2021 3:25:00 PM

thanks Debra, I used to love going to my son's nativity when he was small and try to go to carols by candle light (well battery operated faux candles) every year:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 12/21/2021 2:26:00 PM

She doesn’t need to see her grandchild to know how beautiful she is. She sees her in her mind’s eye as an angel every day. Sweet write ,Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2021 3:17:00 PM

Thanks Jenna I do hope Constance likes this one:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/21/2021 1:32:00 PM

The vicarious side of life, is so well captured here Jan, in a very touching beautiful poem, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/21/2021 3:49:00 PM

Decent poetry Jan you wrote the book Don’t ever doubt yourself

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2021 3:16:00 PM

thanks David I do write some decent poetry at times:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/21/2021 1:02:00 PM

- She made is beautiful picture of her angel ... sad she could not see - A lovely poem, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Hope everything is well with you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2021 3:15:00 PM

thanks Anne Lise I am still struggling with covid tiredness and now have a gift from hubby - his cold lol, hope all is good with you and your lovely hubby:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2021 12:20:00 PM

this is precious, jan!!! GREAT Christmas post.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2021 12:57:00 PM

Proof I'm not just a poop poet lol:-) I do hope Constance likes it , it was fun to write an emotional piece:-) hugs Jan xx