Adorable

Melody of robins in concert

    Murmuring of brooks when falling

    The joy of bells ringing morning

    Would pale at the sound of her voice
                                                        adorable 

Seventh Place: Gregory Barden-Liberum Divisa 3-2/17/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Frances, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance
Jayasankar Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 9:39 PM
This is really adorable. Congrats on your win. God bless. ~ Ani
Delaney Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Very nice. Congratulations on your winning place. SuZ
Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:43 AM
beautiful, Frances ~ congrats
Fowler Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations on the win Frances! Linda
Mitra Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 5:01 AM
Yes it is exactly the way you have penned it Frances...Congrats on your win :)
Inman Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Lovely write.
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