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Adopted Swan

Lone swan on the lake
Surrounded by Mallard Ducks
Hatched by their mother

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Tim Ryerson

November 10, 2009 at 2:10 AM

Whether true of the ugly duckling...stilll cleverly done! (don't tell...keep us guessin'!) - Tim

James Fraser

November 3, 2009 at 1:17 PM

We don't see many poems about ducks on the Soup, i have a note in my notes to write one soon >> nice poem Sara >> James

Gert W. Knop

November 3, 2009 at 1:58 AM

That must be true, isn't it Sara? Thank you for commentig "Star-Dreams". Have a nice week. Kind regards, Gert

Jessica Arteaga

November 2, 2009 at 2:48 PM

that sounds lovely if it's true :D

Doris Culverhouse

November 2, 2009 at 2:32 PM

really or a hoax? keep sharing, have a good night.

Adell Foster

November 2, 2009 at 2:30 PM

Excellent imagry form and flow it is a pleasure to have read such a delightful haiku. I thank you Sara for sharing the read and for yoru welcomed comments as well :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

Matthew Anish

November 2, 2009 at 1:17 PM

Lovely scene you paint with this haiku. Did you ever see the PBS series "The Life of Birds"? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Izzy Gumbo

November 2, 2009 at 9:27 AM

Lovely poem Sara. :) thanks for your comment also... and The size of an Atom... so that if we can't reach it... it's within us anyway. :) I wasn't sure you saw that... Hugs and much love my friend.