Adonis and Aphrodite, Soul Partners

God and goddess of love and beauty enlaced with aster in a satin sky, two hearts clenched forever as one in a lover's embrace Souls enraptured, desires of flesh ne'er to quench In a timeless tale, soul mates excavated Love at first sight conceived from his birth, her seed of passion was planted, babe cultivated 'til mature, his splendor became her heart's need The Garden of Adonis shall forever bloom with his beauty Near a flowing river, grows from bloodshed and nectar, red anemone He is fated to share his eternal love with Aphrodite of the sky Tempted from the heavens and underworld, their fervor shall not die Adonis and Aphrodite By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders for Soul Partners Contest (Nette Onclaud) * a rispetto ending in two couplets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win..David
Burch Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 7:58 PM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda!! You are such a gifted Poet!!! said it before, but have to say it again...your work is amazing!!! love you bunches and bunches.....thanks for believing ;-) deb
Song Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 5:57 PM
Nice intertwining of 2 forms, Miss Rhonda! If I told you that I couldn't write about the other soul mates you wouldn't laugh at me would you? Romance and ME do not mix...any other topic, count me in! After Romeo and Juliet my brain just shut down. I still think your strongest form is dizain, but I do enjoy reading all the others too....Have a wonderful Memorial Day weekend! Love, Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 5:35 PM
Very romantic and beautiful, Rhonda. I love the last phrase: their fervor shall not die. I see this won in the contest too. Congratulations.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 7:50 AM
Romance ain't dead, congratulations Rhonda xx
Richards Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 7:38 AM
Such romantic images you have written...just beautiful, Rhonda! Congratulations on your win!!
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Soul Partners" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
Salama  Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 7:19 AM
Very nice write for a great couple! Congratulations on your win Rhonda! :)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 10:22 AM
An awesome write here!!!
Williams Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 4:57 AM
Rhonda you chose one cool couple to do this, I like it, think I migth go for Bonnie and Clyde...David
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 3:38 AM
Beautiful poem Rhonda, heavens garden with all that beauty.- Wish you luck in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise
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May 23, 2012 at 2:45 AM
WOW, Impressive,spectacular write!!!
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