Admiring the Distance

Your black long hair,
 like a cup of coffee in my hands.
 Your hazy light eyes,
 like a smoke from the cigarette I draw on.
 You are standing there in line,
 at the bar, waiting for a drink.
 Beautiful figure, embodiment of femininity,
 too good to be true, too untouchable to hope.
 But I can watch, admire, dream,
 at least I have that, and it’s enough.
 Enough for someone like me.
 I guess I’ll have another cup,
 hold it in my arms, 
 it’s as close as I can get to touching your hair.
 I’ll light up another cigarette,
 and imagine staring in to your eyes.
 You’ll be gone soon,
 they all leave, but I’ll have something,
 I’ll have a vision of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/27/2016 11:55:00 PM
It caught my attention. And before I knew it I was drawn into the world of your poetry and was able to relate to its story.
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Date: 11/18/2015 10:00:00 PM
Rytis, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/17/2015 12:06:00 PM
- Hey Rytis :) - A lovely time to start in an poetry club, autumn and winter is a time we spend a lot of time inside our homes - More time to read and write poetry - I wish you an enjoyable time and warm welcome :) -Thanks for your great first poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Rytis Gervickas
Date: 11/18/2015 12:28:00 AM
Thak you !
Date: 11/17/2015 10:47:00 AM
Rytis, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Rytis Gervickas
Date: 11/18/2015 12:32:00 AM
Thank you very much.I'm still getting used to this site.Its really nice to be welcomed. Its great to have a place to share my poetry :)
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