Admiring a Full Moon - Trochee

A full moon, she paraded amongst subdued stars A bright sun swooned then faded admiring afar How the sun's love grew brighter His moon boldly smiled Hanging full, she grew wider her shape had beguiled

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2012 8:26:00 PM

RHONDA, a wonderful congratulations in Andrea's 7/5 TROCHEE contest~ :-) PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/30/2012 6:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "The 7/5 Trochee" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/29/2012 5:13:00 PM

running late, so here’s a generic cheer to you and all….loads of super congrats on your amazing award!! :) huggs

Joseph May

Date: 5/29/2012 12:48:00 PM

congrats on your win Rhonda..

David Williams

Date: 5/29/2012 1:36:00 AM

Rhonda congrats on your win..David

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/29/2012 12:07:00 AM

So beautiful Rhonda! Congratulations on your win, hun!! :-) big hug, love ya, deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2012 12:06:00 AM

this one was SO beautiful, Rhonda. Except for the places where you began with unstressed instead of stressed syllables, this one was perfection. Congrats on your win in my first 7/5 Trochee contest.