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A dandelion sun floats in a
Ty-D-Bowl sky, and
dewy young girls with hair
like shining copper pennies
and unsalted butter
bathe beneath it.

With faith born of MTV,
they worship Ocean---
her heavy metal fury,
her power ballad calm.

But Eros interrupts,
sending her own virile priests
with Bowflex bodies and
Energizer loins
to defile the idolators.

Ocean rebels
and paves the lazy sky
in asphalt clouds.
Sharp quills of rain sting 
both priests and congregants
as they run for cover.

Eros laughs.
Ocean waits for another day.              -5/16/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/20/2015 6:55:00 PM
Hi Mary, Congratulations --- Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:01:00 PM
Mary, Congratulations with your wonderful win! **SKAT**
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Date: 8/17/2015 9:31:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Mary! Great pen!
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Date: 8/15/2015 12:09:00 PM
this one for me was the most well written for USE of language. very skillful writing. I'd have placed it as a numbered win! I love it, Mary.
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Mary Rotman
Date: 8/15/2015 1:50:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. These kids on here probably don't know what Ty-d-bowl is, lol
Date: 8/15/2015 2:11:00 AM
Mary, congratulations on your Honorable Mention;-)Alexis
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Mary Rotman
Date: 8/15/2015 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis.

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