Adieux, Birds

birds tweeting in trees preparing to warm places, flee leaves, their signals be! September 23, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/26/2019 7:17:00 AM

I am wondering if it is cooler there today? It dropped ten degrees here, so the birds are tweeting happily.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/26/2019 7:55:00 AM

No way...oMG..today will be 90! Birds? Some already left All week thereafter in the 70,s Nights here run in the 50's and 40's. Gets cold here in October and Rainy. PR

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/24/2019 7:46:00 PM

Now this is really extra-well penned. That last line is something only a poet sees. (Rules me out, although I did recognize it when I read it). Bravo. Right into my FAVES. Thanks, Panagiota. ~ Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/25/2019 12:51:00 PM

Shcking! A Fave..that's wonderful. You are right about the last line....)))) Panagiota xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/23/2019 7:49:00 PM

A wonderful fall haiku - Happy writing and God bless you always

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/23/2019 10:39:00 PM

Regina, thank you. People loathe my haikus. This may be my last? I don't want to try this again. God be with us both Panagiota