Adieux, Birds

birds tweeting in trees
                    preparing to warm places, flee 
                    leaves, their signals be!





                    September 23, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:17 AM
I am wondering if it is cooler there today? It dropped ten degrees here, so the birds are tweeting happily.
Romios Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:55 AM
No way...oMG..today will be 90! Birds? Some already left All week thereafter in the 70,s Nights here run in the 50's and 40's. Gets cold here in October and Rainy. PR
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Now this is really extra-well penned. That last line is something only a poet sees. (Rules me out, although I did recognize it when I read it). Bravo. Right into my FAVES. Thanks, Panagiota. ~ Gershon
Romios Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Shcking! A Fave..that's wonderful. You are right about the last line....)))) Panagiota xx
Mcintosh Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 7:49 PM
A wonderful fall haiku - Happy writing and God bless you always
Romios Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Regina, thank you. People loathe my haikus. This may be my last? I don't want to try this again. God be with us both Panagiota
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