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Adieu To Romance

Leaves hang limply from thirsty tree branches No breeze dares bestir them, foul is the air The grass lies dying, a faded sere brown No bird his song warbles, flies thickly abound Tired pups on streets lie, their tongues hanging out The sun cooks their fur, miserable drought Empty the parks, no sounds of kids playing Rancid garbage piles up, its stench dismaying... Affairs of the heart, they no longer flower Humidity drains all their vitals' power While the sun burns lovers' walks by the beach The hazy sky's brutal---blood-sucking leech The dog days of summer extinguish romance Unbearable heat just won't give it a chance Iambic Pentameter

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Date: 8/12/2019 8:11:00 PM
Lovely wright Gershon. I see another heat wave is hitting parts of the U.S. this week. We've only had one day over 80 in Saskatoon this year but I feel their pain. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 8/12/2019 9:01:00 PM
David, always a pleasure to hear from you. Thanks for the feedback on this sonnet. :) gw
Date: 8/12/2019 7:06:00 PM
Lots of vivid imagery and in iambic pentameter! Superbly written, Gershon.
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Date: 8/12/2019 7:58:00 PM
Line, thank you for the enthusiasm for this sonnet. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/12/2019 5:58:00 PM
Hello Gershon, sunner is ending and the summer romance has come to an end. yes that is so sad. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 8/12/2019 7:58:00 PM
Thank you for your support, Darlene. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/12/2019 5:38:00 PM
Love it Gershon. Reminds me of all things...being in Chicago with a broken heart and forlorn, more than once. Panagiota
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Date: 8/12/2019 7:57:00 PM
May your heart never be broken again, Panagiota! Thank you for the feedback. Appreciated, Gershon

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