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ADDICTION

LOVING A HEROIN ADDICTED. BUT WHY GOD DID MY LIFE CHANGE SO DRAMATICALLY. WHY PUT HER IN FRONT OF ME SHE MADE ME WEAK AT THE KNEE'S. TODAY MY HEART BLEEDS KNOWING HEROIN IS IN THE LEAD. SEEING HER ARMS BLEED ONLY WANTING TO BE HIGH JUST TO SEE. I WISH SHE COULD FEEL ALL THE PAIN I FEEL EVERYDAY WHEN SHE WAKES UP AND GOES AWAY WONDERING IF SOMEONE MAY RAPE HER TODAY OR GET A CALL TO SAY THEY HAVE FOUND A BODY BY THE BAY. WITH A NOTE AND A NEEDLE IN HER VEIN. NOTE SAYING" I'M SORRY BUT HEROIN HAS WON THE GAME I AM THE CHAMPION OF DESTROYING YOUR LIFE" DEVIL IN DECIZE PUT ME IN YOUR VEIN AND YOU WIN THE ULTIMATE PRIZE DEATH.

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Date: 10/27/2017 4:00:00 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem Melissa, hope there will be many more in the future - // S.S.
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Date: 10/15/2017 8:19:00 AM
That is a very difficult poem to write, with so much pain in there. Am I allowed to give you advice in writing? Don't write in all caps, and make smaller lines, with line breaks. It reads easier. You can call this Free Verse, or prose. It is not ABC however, that has a strict set of rules. But, hang in there, keep writing about it. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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