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Addiction

You are my addiction 
This I know to be true
At a certain age 
A child should be grown
And not think of childish things 
I've known this forever and a day
But, still, I can't help but think of you

         "ICE CREAM"


Just a little humor 7/6/2017  Thursday 8 pm

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/9/2018 11:01:00 AM

Very funny. Never to old for ice cream. Kai

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 3/4/2018 5:59:00 AM

Hi Debbie ,this is very tempting writing , i am feeling desire for ice-cream now....thanks for a lovely ice cream Have a nice day and take care of you

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 3/4/2018 5:59:00 AM

my FAVorite now i will remember you every time i eat ice cream

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 3/4/2018 5:54:00 AM

Thanks Debbie i agree with you.... regarding God saying "don't boast of your good deeds. Prophet Muhammad says , spend in the way of God with right hand in such a way that your left hand do not know of it....so i completely agree with you . if you boast your goods deeds are not counted in the eyes of God. Thanks and take very good care of you....

Frank Sheehan

Date: 10/26/2017 1:10:00 PM

Nice write Debbie. Very humorous. My son and I have the same addiction. It's so true.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/27/2017 11:47:00 AM

haha, love this, Debbie

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/18/2017 5:50:00 AM

Oh this has made my day, brilliant Debbie.

Maria Williams

Date: 7/17/2017 7:29:00 AM

Oh yes make mine a double chocolate with mint sprinkles !! Loved this Debbie, loved the twist at the end...Maria

Carole Duet

Date: 7/13/2017 9:49:00 PM

LOL...you had me until the last words, Debbie. I would never have guessed it would be "ice cream"...but then I have a food "addiction" too: chocolate. Great little poem!

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/13/2017 10:28:00 AM

Of course...if you're going to have an addiction...might as well be "Ice Cream"...now I feel like having some pistachio lol...^WW^

Paul Callus

Date: 7/10/2017 3:40:00 AM

What about some strawberries to go with it!:) My main addiction is black coffee... Regards // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 7/10/2017 2:53:00 AM

Magnum brand is my favorite! I LOVE this cute poem! Thanks for sharing and for your visit on my poem. More blessings! love lots and hugs, Galeo

Darren White

Date: 7/10/2017 1:25:00 AM

Same addiction, vanilla!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2017 7:46:00 PM

Hey, Debbie. I just got back from vacation. that is why my comments are so sporadic lately. Lots to catch up on before going back to work tomorrow. Where is this firefly poem. I will look quickly for it. If I don't find it. Let me know where to find it.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/8/2017 9:00:00 PM

Cookies and cream, think about it...Love it Debbie.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 7/8/2017 2:50:00 PM

Nicely done, Debbie. I did not expect that ending. // Barry

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/7/2017 4:30:00 PM

Welcome to the club, Debbie. Lol! Your title is so misdirecting cool. You got me for sure. Fine sweet poem. Love and smiles.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/7/2017 9:39:00 AM

I'll have two scoops please:) A weakness of mine, too, Debbie. A fun one!

Chris Green

Date: 7/7/2017 6:23:00 AM

I think we share the same addiction. I never turn down ice cream no matter how stuffed I am...there is always room for that addiction. This was fun Debbie.