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Addicted Towards Happiness

~Tonight A Free Ride ~ Tonight my thoughts are running towards my healing ocean, becoming the place where voluntarily I am convinced to watch the thousands of stars in the sky, illuminating my shore on arrival, to share my lively routine visits with this one whale friend that accidentally, have come to meet a few months ago. Approaching with a jester it looked me in the eye moved its head asking, why am I gloomy tonight? come lady ride on my back let me take you away from your everyday thoughts let us experience our journey I invited the stars in the sky to lighten up your dimness tonight. Yet, now that we have each other try a different approach towards your loneliness the wind is a friend and will not blow you away the moon promised a short visit to accompany the stars. Accepting the proposal of that ride it will clarify the energy of my inner body and soul the way my friend the whale has it looking up thinking counting the stars will give me the opportunity to dig deeper towards my senses, my spaciousness, peacefulness as a new approach. Suddenly with a falling star nothing seemed impossible to arouse my intense curiosity about life's mysteries how I ended up feeling that lonesome before I met my friend, determined to lean towards my depth and discover my beauty and power that I have abandoned, when I failed to notice how much emptiness existed in my depth. Instantly I started feeling addicted towards my happiness I allowed my thoughts to stir my presentiments understand my liveliness, after descending on shore. Once arrived I thanked the stars that allowed me to enjoy the ocean cooperated to help me redeem an aluminous light through my coming years. That voyage assembled my gladness to lean towards all the advantages that actually already exist beyond. Thank you my friend. Always. Therese Bacha June 27 2013

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Date: 4/8/2013 5:31:00 PM
soupmail, sweetie
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/8/2013 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Love Terry xoxoxoxo
Date: 3/25/2013 11:05:00 PM
Not only is this a beautiful piece of Prose, Terry, but haunting because each Mother must face the crisis of children growing up and leaving the nest...This is truly great! I love it! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/25/2013 11:27:00 PM
Annalise, This is life, i know, still i miss them so much, i see them once a year, due to circumstances, and this year i could not go, it was hard for me emotionally. But writing gave me a new breath to survive. Thank you so much. Love terry xoxo
Date: 3/23/2013 5:34:00 AM
Beautiful outstanding poetry!!! Thank you for visiting my blog...xxx hugs Michael
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/23/2013 9:06:00 AM
Glad you passed by, thank you so much. Terry xoxo
Date: 3/20/2013 11:07:00 AM
Terry; This is beautiful. I enjoyed it all the way through. Must be nice to have a friend like that. You know what - I too wish you lived close to me. Have a nice day. Lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/23/2013 9:05:00 AM
Hello Lucy, missed you, hope you doing great. Thanks for enjoying reading my poem. Keep listening to the music. Life is Beautiful no matter what. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 3/18/2013 2:20:00 PM
A wonderful story Terry. I live in Regina and I guess you to have all this snow. It has been a terrible winter for snow and cold. We should be getting spring but we were -20 last night. Need spring to hurry up. Thanks for your comments. love phyl
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/18/2013 2:37:00 PM
Well this is the story of our life, i usually spend the winter with my sons, but due to some health condition i could not travel, but i had poetry to keep me company this winter. Hope you will be warm soon. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 3/17/2013 11:04:00 PM
Astounding, stunning and spellbinding prose, Terry...The lack of punctuation makes it even more so...I could be wrong here but this reads like one of those 'vivid dreams' that occur occasionally (not often enough for me!) Thank you for this - Tim
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/17/2013 11:18:00 PM
I am so blessed to have someone like you appreciate my poems, and be so faithful thank you so much...Good nite Terry lovexoxoxo
Date: 3/17/2013 11:15:00 AM
This is a fantastic and amazing write my friend! I loved reading it this afternoon! What a exciting trip you went on, very revealing for your life! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/17/2013 10:46:00 AM
Terry, you are a true storyteller, it was a wonderous ride, constance
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/17/2013 10:56:00 AM
Constance, thank you so much. I love to put whats in my heart in words, and i do have so much still un said......Have a lovely Sunday. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 3/17/2013 12:43:00 AM
Terry, I really enjoyed this magical ride with you on the back of a whale. you know what? I wrote about riding with porpoises one time and also on top of one!! We sure have the same fantasies, don't we? I love the beauty of your soul in this one.
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Date: 3/17/2013 10:54:00 AM
Hi Andrea, yes we do have a lot in common, i hope you are still having a nice weekend, i read about the movie, see you later.......love Terry xoxoxoxo

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