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Added Honey

He said she had a laugh like added honey
and said her hair was long and lovely
she laughed and said his hair was too
he laughed... and then she knew
.
she sat and talked about the weather
and said too hot for his jacket leather
and she remembers his blue eyes so very well
and thought 'he's' not shy'....she can always tell

they sat and talked about nothing.....and places
in a high street cafe of crowded faces
he said ' is your latte hot'
by then .........she had forgot

he said her laugh is still like added honey
and tells her,  her hair is still long and lovely
she laughs and said his was too
but then he cut it, when it grew

they fell in love, it was meant to be
to grow old together, see
and the first meeting felt ,  just so very right
but she's never told him............................he's still her light











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Date: 7/25/2025 7:21:00 AM
You have a lovely style of writing - very conversational and detailed. We lean into the almost gossipy verbage.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/25/2025 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Kim. l'm sad to say l had to delete one of newest poems this morning as the title ( that was also put into the poem) was not appropriate when l looked up the meaning of it. I'm really not a worldy person so had no idea lol..so l'll have to re write it again.
Date: 7/23/2025 9:20:00 AM
People just don't laugh anymore. Beats me how people get together these days at all. So this ticks all the boxes, and I like honey.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/23/2025 9:30:00 AM
Hope all well Paul, thanks for dropping by. They are now making A! female robots for companions for males. ...l give up with this world :(
Date: 7/23/2025 5:50:00 AM
Sweet relationship. I love it when my girl laughs. She's in so much pain all the time
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/23/2025 9:32:00 AM
hope your wife gets well soon..Jackie

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