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Adapting To the Good Life - Or

Schmooze me darling, my appetite is rapt.
Drinks with umbrellas - a tropical freeze.
Cruise for teal blue waters whilst I adapt.
Shrinks the mainland - aims towards* coconut trees.

Muse takes the wheel - island adventure mapped.
Winks his erotic eye - how wild the seas.
Weather for sailing - no longer a wreck,
Tether me, baby, to your wafting deck.

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Joseph May

Date: 7/2/2019 4:19:00 PM

Beautifully done Kim..Congrats on your win..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2019 8:46:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph!

Charles Messina

Date: 7/1/2019 2:21:00 PM

This is a great entry Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs ~Charlie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2019 8:00:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charles!

John Gondolf

Date: 7/1/2019 1:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kim. I enjoyed this romantic poem with a little touch of sensuality. All my best. John

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2019 7:59:00 PM

Thank you, John! Hugs...Kim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/24/2019 10:02:00 AM

You did this so well!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2019 1:33:00 PM

Thank you, Richard! :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/24/2019 9:48:00 AM

Rima Ottova poetry form I am not familiar with, but enjoyed this poem and wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2019 1:33:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/24/2019 2:25:00 AM

Wonderful poem Kim. As always your imagery and combinations with feelings are magic. Thank you and good luck. Panagiota

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2019 5:39:00 AM

Thank you so much, Panagiota!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/23/2019 5:06:00 PM

This is just great. I have no clue about 'Ottova rima,' but what you've written, especially the last two lines, packs a real wallop! ~ First mate, Gerhson

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2019 5:17:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon! :)