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Adapting To the Good Life - Or

Schmooze me darling, my appetite is rapt. Drinks with umbrellas - a tropical freeze. Cruise for teal blue waters whilst I adapt. Shrinks the mainland - aims towards* coconut trees. Muse takes the wheel - island adventure mapped. Winks his erotic eye - how wild the seas. Weather for sailing - no longer a wreck, Tether me, baby, to your wafting deck.

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Date: 7/2/2019 4:19:00 PM
Beautifully done Kim..Congrats on your win..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2019 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 7/1/2019 2:21:00 PM
This is a great entry Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs ~Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2019 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charles!
Date: 7/1/2019 1:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. I enjoyed this romantic poem with a little touch of sensuality. All my best. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2019 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, John! Hugs...Kim
Date: 6/24/2019 10:02:00 AM
You did this so well!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2019 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Richard! :)
Date: 6/24/2019 9:48:00 AM
Rima Ottova poetry form I am not familiar with, but enjoyed this poem and wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2019 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer :)
Date: 6/24/2019 2:25:00 AM
Wonderful poem Kim. As always your imagery and combinations with feelings are magic. Thank you and good luck. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2019 5:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Panagiota!
Date: 6/23/2019 5:06:00 PM
This is just great. I have no clue about 'Ottova rima,' but what you've written, especially the last two lines, packs a real wallop! ~ First mate, Gerhson
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2019 5:17:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon! :)
Date: 6/23/2019 4:31:00 PM
Kim, you are either always on vacation, or your mind is always at the Caribbean. Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2019 5:18:00 PM
My mind is there! Cruising the NorthEast in the fall...it’s been 18 months...we’re getting jittery lol

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