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ADAM AND EVE

In Eden when Adam meet Eve He said, “You are nude I perceive” A bit of a madam, She offered to Adam A bite of a juicy James Grieve He knew the fruit was forbidden And said their bits should be hidden. But she said, “I insist,” And, too weak to resist, Adam did what he was bidden There’s a moral, you might have guessed, For God really was not impressed. So the moral for me, And I’m sure you’ll agree, Is women don’t always know best

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Date: 9/16/2024 6:26:00 AM
'too weak to resist' answer lies there, good one dear poet. congratulations.
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Date: 9/15/2024 9:33:00 AM
Great limerick-ing. But think of this. If the woman had not tempted Adam, would any of us be here today? Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/15/2024 7:59:00 AM
Brilliant, congratulations
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Date: 9/15/2024 7:52:00 AM
Bryn, a great limerick set, congratulations on your winning placement.
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