Actually Going Outside

Actually Going Outside

We decide to do the cliff walk
from Bray to Greystones
even though the day is grey
and the heavy clouds are low overhead
with a distinct possibility that it will bucket out of the skies
but we don’t care
because we’ve set aside the day for this
and a few pissy showers aren’t going to stop us
from making the journey along the winding Wicklow coastline
because we promised ourselves we’d do it
and we want to stick to our guns this time
because we’ve spent too long putting things off
and wasting our time on Facebook and You Tube
and prevaracation
and telling our friends
all the interesting things we do when in reality
it’s a virtual reality we’re fabricating that is more or less
an entangled mass of tissued stories and tall tales
and posed-for selfies
to delude ourselves and others
that we have an actual life
but not this time
because
this time
we are actually going outside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 1/22/2023 2:28:00 PM
I hope you truly enjoyed your outing (at least as much as I enjoyed reading of your determination to actually do it!)
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Date: 12/26/2022 12:52:00 AM
Yes, sometimes you've just got to brave the elements and get going.
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Date: 12/25/2022 7:13:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha! It does get this way, doesn't it. Esp. in winter?! Season's best, Gershon
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