Actions Speak Louder Than Words

A kind word, of course,
Can soothe the flustered soul or bring a smile
To a frowning face. That’s a given, but
In one’s troubled times, words still are
Only words.
Naked they become, for we see right through them when
Sincerity is misspoken and devoid of thoughtful deed.

Simple gestures are more meaningful than pretty words.
Persuasive poets perhaps pen verses to their beloved
Elegant and extravagant like pearls. Empty all the same
Are artful words given in pretense or with thought of recompense.
Kindness for me is found in action!

Lovers - real and honest lovers - are
Obliging, and they are more than kind!
Unabashedly they step in to defend those whom they hold dear.
During good times and bad, they will be there,
Enduring every hardship by their lover’s side,
Relinquishing their own needs for the needs of their adored.

Thank God if such a man or woman
Has ever graced your life.
Actions of their ardor
Never should be taken for granted.

Words can be loud with promises,
Overflowing also with
Romance!  But only a fool would
Deny that one's exhibition of love is
So much the sweeter!

Written March 29, 2016 for the Cliche contest of Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Inman Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Wonderful sentiment here Andrea.
Arnone Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Very good. I enjoyed your proclamations of love....
Spagnola Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 4:42 PM
SWEET win Andrea!!:), jill
Kimathi Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 10:26 AM
Indeed, the action you took to make this acrostic was the first thing I noticed before reading the words, lol. Congrats Andrea, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
A   Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "Cliche" win. Love LINDA
Hicks Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Great to see you on the winner's list, Andrea. It was a wonderful poem.
Mcclain Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Hi Andrea, Great work--and holy mackerel, you made an acrostic out of it no less! I'm impressed, and congrats on your placement. Cheers, Brian
Hamilton Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Relinquishing their own needs for the other, true altruistic love, very well said acrostic with lot's of truth. Great flow didn't seem like an acrostic at all!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 2:57 AM
Congrats on ur very wonderful win with this amazing write dear Andrea..
Parmale Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 12:36 AM
Great write Andrea!!!Congrats for your worthy win!!!
Davey Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Great Acrostic Andrea and wonderful over all write, congrats
May Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Great write and win Andrea...Congrats
Turner Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Truer words were never spoken. A fantastic acrostic Andrea. Lip service can be very deceiving. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Peace my friend:)
Walker Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Thought provoking and powerful write.
Daniel Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 8:03 AM
I love this:}beautifully said:}
Maverick Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Top write here Andrea, you echo my thrust on parts of an old write I did (vanity vanity) Good to see your words today."
Palli Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 2:22 AM
Very clever! Good use of cliches infused with wisdom.
Hicks Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Stunning take on the theme, Andrea. Words are the prologue before the action takes place ... perhaps they were never meant to stand alone. "Empty all the same are artful words given in pretense or with thought of recompense"." << love the message of this line. Best of luck. Deserving of a high place.
Sefunmi Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 9:31 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem, my friend.
Haight Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 7:59 PM
What an amazing Acrostic, Andrea! Beautiful words of wisdom read so smoothly with your use of enjambment! Silent One will love this! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Devnath  Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Wonderful Acrostic you have penned having double effects. Loved much "Relinquishing their own needs for the needs of their adored". Truly expressed. Loved always, bl
May Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Nicely written Andrea...I liked your use of alliteration in the first 2 stanzas ...hugs
Vaso Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 6:11 AM
What a beautiful poem, and these words so very very true, loved this!
Muideen Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 2:32 AM
Thanks for sharing and for explication of this pretty subject. Great write.............A.M.
Austin Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Yes, the comprehensive definition of some motor mouths I've seen and heard of. their mouths are so busy with superlatives they make no time for deeds. That's letting 'em have it, Andrea. Love, daver
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