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Act of Violence

Soul captivating bitter sweet
Hatred on a Manchester venue tweet
Sadness shades shape
Rucksack carrying 
hidden by a religious cape destroyer of souls
 
Shifting clouds
Of smoke in a bang 
so loudly deafening sick 
When someone cherished disappears
As terrorism's hand appears nasty
 
Abandoning all reason falling into a trap
Believing in their vile inhumane crap
Where the unspoken word  
Has now become strangled silence 
Life's are gone it's so absurd
Just another ridiculous act of violence

A Collaborated Poem 
by Liam McDaid and Owen Yeates

Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2017

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Elizabeth Kinch Date: 5/24/2017 12:18:00 PM From such a heinous crime you have written something exceptional. I pray for these terrifying acts of terrorism to cease. Liam and Owen, a seven. Heartfelt prayers for everyone suffering the affects from this senseless act. Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 5/23/2017 4:59:00 PM Hi Liam!:))Wow! Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding collaboration poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully wrtten with truth n' compasson.Very heartfelt!My heart is so very heavy n' sad for all those affected by this very horrible tragedy.My heart n' prayers go to all of them.I'm so very relieved to know that your son is safe n' sound, Liam. Thank God that he's okay.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/23/2017 3:49:00 PM My heart is so heavy seeing the news - it is something those young people will never forget but for all the wrong reasons:-( my thoughts and prayers are with everyone involved in this tragedy:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 5/23/2017 3:58:00 PM jan my son is at college there i thank god he is safe i think they should round up every every member of that bombers family and deport them back to where they belong thank you pal for the wonderful comment bless you dear friend for the prayers in this sad affair