Act of Violence

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My deepest condolences in prayer goes to the families of this barbaric monstrous act carried out by evil godless humans so heartbreaking to hear this news on this sadness my prayers are with the Manchester victims today and their grieving families

Soul captivating bitter sweet Hatred on a Manchester venue tweet Sadness shades shape Rucksack carrying hidden by a religious cape destroyer of souls Shifting clouds Of smoke in a bang so loudly deafening sick When someone cherished disappears As terrorism's hand appears nasty Abandoning all reason falling into a trap Believing in their vile inhumane crap Where the unspoken word Has now become strangled silence Life's are gone it's so absurd Just another ridiculous act of violence A Collaborated Poem by Liam McDaid and Owen Yeates

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Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/24/2017 12:18:00 PM

From such a heinous crime you have written something exceptional. I pray for these terrifying acts of terrorism to cease. Liam and Owen, a seven. Heartfelt prayers for everyone suffering the affects from this senseless act.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/23/2017 4:59:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding collaboration poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully wrtten with truth n' compasson.Very heartfelt!My heart is so very heavy n' sad for all those affected by this very horrible tragedy.My heart n' prayers go to all of them.I'm so very relieved to know that your son is safe n' sound, Liam. Thank God that he's okay.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Jan Allison

Date: 5/23/2017 3:49:00 PM

My heart is so heavy seeing the news - it is something those young people will never forget but for all the wrong reasons:-( my thoughts and prayers are with everyone involved in this tragedy:-( hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/23/2017 3:58:00 PM

jan my son is at college there i thank god he is safe i think they should round up every every member of that bombers family and deport them back to where they belong thank you pal for the wonderful comment bless you dear friend for the prayers in this sad affair