Across the Way

Across the Way

Across the way on a misty fog morning
I see forms that move and seem to wave;
Have you returned to me, my Love,
Your spirit traveling from the grave?
Across the way.

A star or two still shine and beam,
Shaping my sister lightly dancing with joy,
Our mother stately, Daddy’s song with the breeze I hear,
And is that that lovely little neighbor boy.
Across the way.

Our pets are sniffing each other in play
As the mist darkens and shapes with a breeze,
And you, my old neighbor who lived in that house
Prop your arms on your hips to survey the scene.
Across the way.

As I move from my window with tears in my eyes,
As I wonder if you are all really true,
With no more sadness you wait for me
With God in heaven when the sun breaks through.
Across the way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sharp Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Very emotive, conveyed with an authentic depth of feeling. Very good write.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Hello Sunlite Wanter,I like the last verse of your poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 10:28 AM
A writing that steers the emotions of someone on earth and on heaven dearest, Sunlite!
Green Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 8:35 AM
This was beautifully sad my friend. Your heart and your imagination shine in this. You have expressed the emotions so deeply with your words. Nicely done.
La France Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Sun, a very emotional write, it touched my heart, well done ~
Ashley Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 6:03 PM
A deeply moving and meaningful poem, Sunlite. An inspirational beauty. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Wanter Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. I do appreciate your comments.
Horsman Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Beautiful, deep, yet ever so inspiring poetry, love this..
Wanter Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:23 PM
So nice of you! I am glad you liked it.
One Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Nice write Sunlite..
Wanter Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Thank you. You know I appreciate you.
Michael Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Special...this one is...Across the way... All the best Sunlite
Wanter Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:21 PM
And always special are your comments.
Sands Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 12:40 PM
A very touching, beautiful poem Sunlite. I love it :)
Wanter Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Thank you, Heidi!!!
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