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Across the Page

Walking a tightrope across my inner self… Dare to look down pass the pages from my shelf… It tells the story of the mind that sits outside my soul… Discolored and torn but the meaning still screams from what is whole… Tiny scars stained by raindrops that never really dried… Washed down my hand and caressed the tears I could never hide… The journey left me crawling for my peace… Onto a table beside a pen I sit and release…

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/13/2017 10:19:00 PM

love it :)

Judy Konos

Date: 10/26/2013 9:50:00 AM

Great Write! But then look who wrote it ..no surprise...thanks!

Kelli Egloff-Metzgar

Date: 10/6/2013 6:08:00 PM

Again, your writing added to a fav of mine. I completely understand your feelings, so cleverly spilled onto paper. Loved it. - Kelli

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/18/2013 2:03:00 AM

that is exactly what i feel when im about to write black poem.. very strong write, Michae :)

Cherie Thomas

Date: 8/6/2013 1:05:00 AM

Hi micheal...Your amazing!!! Your words are so touching to the soul...I so feel this, at times...beautiful piece thank you for sharing:) Cheriexx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2013 2:33:00 PM

I always enjoy your metaphorical poetry especially when it involves the poet and the pen!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2013 10:46:00 AM

Emotional and gripping work that you have penned in this one..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading it this morning..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/31/2013 9:40:00 AM

you come across ever so mighty, the scars that define us make us the great writers we are,enjoyed your write ~always, Linda

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2013 7:57:00 AM

Impressive, wow, that's a mighty thin rope to walk, but if anyone can cross the pages in his or her life. It is surely you. Keep on writing, somehow I feel as if this past journey is the inspiration and fault at your pen....... always ~SKAT~

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/30/2013 11:11:00 PM

Another fabulous write you have written here, such a splendid poem, I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this evening! Great Work!!