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Across the Meadow

across the meadow winter ferns grow icicles…. mother’s frozen drool Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/5/2011 11:59:00 AM
When I stop to read a poem twice it means something is in ... something nice. Well done!
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Date: 1/3/2011 9:33:00 PM
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Date: 1/2/2011 2:39:00 PM
Hi Caryl. Wow. The last line is as fresh as maiden snow. Not that there is anything wrong with the rest. The very best of luck in the contest. Thanks for the visit.... Eamon
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:27:00 AM
Nice Haiku!!! well done... should do well in the contest....always Michael
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Date: 1/1/2011 11:51:00 PM
wow, you are great with the final lines, which is so needful in a haiku!!
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:44:00 AM
Very, very cool haiku, Caryl. (And no pun intended.) Mother nature is drooling in many parts of the country right now. Best wishes inCharles' contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:45:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this great work...Enjoyed..May this year be your best year of inspiration..Sara
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:59:00 AM
fascinating word play, caryl.. did one too for the contest... best of luck to you! :) nette
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