Across the Meadow

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David Smalling

Date: 1/5/2011 11:59:00 AM

When I stop to read a poem twice it means something is in ... something nice. Well done!

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/3/2011 9:33:00 PM

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Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/2/2011 2:39:00 PM

Hi Caryl. Wow. The last line is as fresh as maiden snow. Not that there is anything wrong with the rest. The very best of luck in the contest. Thanks for the visit.... Eamon

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/2/2011 8:27:00 AM

Nice Haiku!!! well done... should do well in the contest....always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2011 11:51:00 PM

wow, you are great with the final lines, which is so needful in a haiku!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2011 10:44:00 AM

Very, very cool haiku, Caryl. (And no pun intended.) Mother nature is drooling in many parts of the country right now. Best wishes inCharles' contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2011 9:45:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this great work...Enjoyed..May this year be your best year of inspiration..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/1/2011 8:59:00 AM

fascinating word play, caryl.. did one too for the contest... best of luck to you! :) nette