Across the Horizon

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across the horizon a newborn sun spreading its wings AP: 2nd place 2021 Posted on August 3, 2021

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Brian Strand

Date: 9/3/2021 11:55:00 PM

Indeed Line,nice&accurate imagery

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/4/2021 6:36:00 AM

Thank you, Brian ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/17/2021 1:32:00 AM

Ah, yes "a newborn sun" which reminds me of once-upon-a-Bible's "newborn son".

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2021 3:34:00 AM

Thanks, Caren ~

Joanna Feltham

Date: 8/3/2021 1:40:00 PM

Good evening. I'm a big fan of haliku poetry. I really enjoyed your poem, I feel the 'sun spreading it's wings' is beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2021 3:34:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/3/2021 11:31:00 AM

hello Lin, I have never seen a sun rise. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/3/2021 4:08:00 PM

Hello Lin, oh maybe I am. LOL.Hugs.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2021 1:33:00 PM

LOL you are going to bed too early ~

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/3/2021 9:21:00 AM

A nice take on sunrise...Delice

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2021 1:34:00 PM

Thank you very much, Delice ~ much appreciated