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across the horizon a newborn sun spreading its wings AP: 2nd place 2021 Posted on August 3, 2021

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Date: 9/3/2021 11:55:00 PM
Indeed Line,nice&accurate imagery
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/4/2021 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Brian ~
Date: 8/17/2021 1:32:00 AM
Ah, yes "a newborn sun" which reminds me of once-upon-a-Bible's "newborn son".
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2021 3:34:00 AM
Thanks, Caren ~
Date: 8/3/2021 1:40:00 PM
Good evening. I'm a big fan of haliku poetry. I really enjoyed your poem, I feel the 'sun spreading it's wings' is beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2021 3:34:00 AM
Thank you, Joanna ~
Date: 8/3/2021 11:31:00 AM
hello Lin, I have never seen a sun rise. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/3/2021 4:08:00 PM
Hello Lin, oh maybe I am. LOL.Hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2021 1:33:00 PM
LOL you are going to bed too early ~
Date: 8/3/2021 9:21:00 AM
A nice take on sunrise...Delice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2021 1:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Delice ~ much appreciated