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Across Realms

Far away, from the rim of the Earth Beyond the oceans, beyond human reach, Across realms, I have found my way, Into the aerial pockets of the blue. On spread wings I have soared To watch you ever from above! I am now one with the stars, Floating in ether like a mysterious sprite Here where I dwell unseen, Is a land beyond all cares. Here is such lively luminousness, And such cheerful blaze Cherubs on wings fly around joyous, Where love is a timeless theme, And where blooms a million stars. From here, I shall pluck a star for you. Let it shine in your eyes, And mirror the blue sky, Where I shall script the code of love (I try to forget your eyes, Two limpid pools brimming with tears, When I set out on my journey And broke through the clouds, Across mysterious realms) Now as we are apart, we shall treasure, Our silent love, spanning across realms, Till you come to join me, never to part, To be extended to immeasurable eternity Transcending the limits of time! May.3. 2023 ~ Placed First~ Pick- a -Title. Vol.36. Poetry Contest Sponsor. Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/23/2023 10:57:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, your words soar on magnificent images sending me into sweet realms of mystical joy that "span" beyond the realms of time and space. Your words always capture your theme perfectly. They are a marvelous journey into your heart and soul. Congratulations on your win sweet friend! Blessings as you and your poetic pen soar into poetry's sweetest realms.
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Date: 5/20/2023 6:57:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this brilliant poem, Valsa:-) I loved it!
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Date: 5/20/2023 8:48:00 PM
Thank you so much ! Participating in your contests is a pleasure for me. Stay Blessed dear friend.
Date: 5/4/2023 7:01:00 PM
You're either a twinkling star 'up above the world so high,' or you're far away, 'Somewhere, over the Rainbow!' ~ Mother Goose and Broadway Joe
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Date: 5/4/2023 4:24:00 PM
Valsa, you have done an outstanding job with this poem! I adore how love can span multiple dimensions. A heartfelt love story about a person who has passed away and is hoping to be rejoined by the love of his life. You have wonderful metaphors and rhythm in your writing. A Fave for me!
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Date: 5/4/2023 4:16:00 PM
So deep and mystical. I loved it!
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Date: 5/4/2023 2:11:00 AM
This is brilliant work, Valsa:) love the way how love extends across realms:)
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Date: 5/3/2023 9:47:00 PM
Superb imagination and great visions. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/3/2023 9:46:00 PM
A touching love story of one that has passed awaiting to be reunited with their love. Excellent imagery and flow, Valsa. A FAV for me! Thanks for sharing, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 5/3/2023 1:50:00 PM
A wonderful write/story. Good Luck. Have a great day.............
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Date: 5/3/2023 6:47:00 AM
Even when our soul mates pass the bond of love is never broken. Best of luck Valsa, hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 5/3/2023 5:48:00 AM
A splendid write, Valsa--a journey into the aerial pockets of the blue... We will all take that route eventually--transcending the limits of time, as you say. Best to you.
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Date: 5/3/2023 4:48:00 AM
very deep expression of loving, a travel in these mysterous , thanks for the beautiful penning
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