Get Your Premium Membership

Acoustic Visions - 1

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Regina Mcintosh.


Acoustic visions that I had rejected Brightening hearts with dreams perfected Whispering faith through my soul With lavender wishes that would console Painting affection across my thoughts Leaving my feelings tied up in knots Caressing my smile so that it is amplified Gracing eternal hopes that would abide Guitar images glide through my mind Enriching my life with joy and love combined Music so wise it lifts the broken hearted With a melody so alive it is uncharted Notes ring and cling to the edges of my mind Where the breaths of harmony are so very kind Playing out the praises that drift to God’s ear Lighting up the heavens with love He can hear Making a joyful noise that rings life to the harkening Echoing through hearts, lighting where it’s darkening Gentle songs and hymns grace the longing heart With joy, hope and love that God does impart Through the caress of a voice ringing with wonders Rain or sun, the embrace of the chorus thunders Sounds of laughter kissing the choir with delight Ringing through the sweet moments into the twilight Without this caress from the voices so alive with joy There would be no blessed tune for God to enjoy Praising with the cry that drifts up to His throne With voices that vibrate with the light they’ve shown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/30/2021 11:08:00 AM
The music of praise reverberates though each couplet Gina! Praise music is beautifully blended into the harmony of each line. Wonderfully done. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and a musical hug to you!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/30/2021 9:59:00 AM
This is lovely, Gina! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2021 4:27:00 AM
A beautifully created couplet. Congratulations on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/23/2021 2:28:00 AM
Hi Regina - you abundant love for Jesus and God is evident. I applaud you for the way you always put it across to us all in such perfect rhyme - always so creative. Well said my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
Login to Reply
Date: 2/21/2021 10:18:00 PM
Your sublime expression is boundless dear Gina..Always a breathe fo fresh air..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/21/2021 7:50:00 PM
Beautiful and uplifting!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/21/2021 7:20:00 AM
God is love and compassion. He will hear our praises and prayers. ~~
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things