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Sponsor Edward Ibeh
Contest Name This or That, Vol 26; Title Chosen: Acme

July 2, 2024

 

GOD* foremost occupies top priority in my life... He's my faith's pinnacle allowing me to exude serenity in claiming triumph for reaching- out pursuits, as my soul basks along blest divine care, shielded by grace of hope's summit wafting mercy --- grateful for reconciliation’s bliss midst pardon's fulfillment from guilt... Now, my heart cleansed from sin's wages, shares joy of eternal assurance radiating victory, vibrantly worshipful sans doubt but anchored by truth, freely soaring midst celestial liberty toward heavenly acme.
*Deuteronomy 6:5 And thou shalt love the LORD thy God with all thine heart, and with all thy soul, and with all thy might. July 2, 2024 3rd place, "This or That, Vol 26" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 7/27/2024

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Date: 7/28/2024 4:12:00 PM
Such a wonderfully composed shape poem. I love your creativity, Beata! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 7/28/2024 8:28:00 AM
Wonderful shaped poetry! How creative for this contest! Xo
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/28/2024 8:59:00 AM
Thanks. God bless you.
Date: 7/27/2024 9:08:00 PM
you place God on top of life's pyramid. well done. congratulations dear poet.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/28/2024 8:57:00 AM
Thanks. Indeed, God deserves to be on top. God bless you.

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