Acid Rain In Erode

Grey heavenly skies
in reaction to her hurt
clouds so different
In cry, falls, penetration
acid rain erodes her so










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Peranteau Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 5:46 AM
James...this is a scary write dear poet....good one ! james
Maverick Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 11:22 AM
i believe this to be an environment write James?, it is well worth writing such a piece! also thank you for your comments.
Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 2:41 PM
Good one..I know how that cloud feels..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 2:27 PM
Yes, it is grey all around the world these days, I do believe so!!
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