Raul Moreno Poet Choka

Acid Rain

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Psychedelic notes,
Strummed with creative wonder:
From a lonely soul.
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Music for the world,
Crying guitar solos hum:
Raining energy.
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While his audience,
Awaited the finale:
Burning his guitar.



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Inspired by Jimi Hendrix

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Freddie Robinson Jr. November 28, 2017 at 6:28 AM Breathtaking poetic artistry, visually and linguistically, Raul. First poem of yours I've read, and I can already see you are a master craftsman w/the pen. This poem rocks! May love light your path always.

Phil Capitano June 2, 2016 at 7:56 AM Great form and a fan of Jimi.

... Gigno February 3, 2013 at 10:33 PM !!!

James Fraser December 15, 2009 at 1:58 PM Raul, this is simply brilliant, awesome, super - going to my favs, i thoroughly enjoy Jimi's sounds >> James

Tim Ryerson December 14, 2009 at 8:14 PM A stunner here, Raul... I think he was probably from another planet, don't you? And maybe just stopped by to pay us a short visit? His performance at Woodstock certainly seems to suggest that! - Tim

James Marshall Goff December 14, 2009 at 4:47 PM love the visual with the poem... and giving freedom to the reader to visualize the energy expressed with your artistic composition! wow! jim

John Weber December 11, 2009 at 5:36 AM Massively righteous solo, my man! The notes blaze my ears! Warm regards, John.

Tyler Martin December 10, 2009 at 12:10 PM Amazing work on the guitar, your creativity soars in my opinion. Nicely fitting to the poem itself, again amazing.

Elizabeth Neal December 9, 2009 at 11:32 PM That guitar is awesome, I have seen some of your past concrete work and I think you are by far so talented.

Marty Owens December 9, 2009 at 5:46 PM I love your guitar...love Jimi Hendrix...but most of all I love your poem...Marty

Debbie Guzzi December 8, 2009 at 1:05 PM Holy Moley! That's the best picture art I ever saw here! You go guy! Stretch those wings! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 5, 2009 at 9:51 AM Unique idea, Raul, and quite creative.. U are a man of many talents... a fav for me.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

Sara Kendrick December 4, 2009 at 4:06 PM Very beautiful design that had to take time and effort. Keep the designing keys busy. Sara

Abe Lopez December 4, 2009 at 1:13 PM an awsome tribute to Mr. hendrix.... great j-o-b R.M.

James Faulkner December 4, 2009 at 11:17 AM this poem is definatly my fav of the day so far. love the hendrix expierience. love and peace: james......definatly headed to the favs

Charmaine Chircop December 4, 2009 at 11:09 AM I love Jimi Hendrix,one of my fav song s is "Castles made of Sand".. i looooooooooooooooovveeeeeeee this poem.......amaaaaaaaaaaaazinnnnnnnggggggggggglyyyyyyyy creative.. and that Guitar,We ve got his guitar,,,,,,Bravo Raul..going to my favzzzzz--Charma;)

Jared Pickett December 4, 2009 at 8:38 AM I have a new fav..... I REALLY like this poem..... Hendrix guitar.... OMG, how creative.....:JP]

Carrie Richards December 4, 2009 at 8:14 AM This piece of art is incredible....! WoW!! What multiple talents you have, Raul!

L'Nass Shango December 4, 2009 at 4:47 AM A visual, textual superlative wonder, old friend ... a mastery from your storied genius is apt for the intended other genius of his craft. Well done, Raul, you concede nothing to time in your quest for sublimity. Peace and love

Juliane Thomas December 4, 2009 at 4:25 AM Wonderful tribute, and I love the form of this poetry. Really nice! ~Juliane

Madeleine Mclaughlin December 4, 2009 at 3:20 AM Nice tribute.

Simone Segal December 4, 2009 at 2:18 AM A masterpiece! love Simone