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I love lox, but believe it or not I don't like salmon...go figure.

BTW, I never met Betty Grabel....lol

I was eating a bagel, With the late Betty Grabel When I accidentally, Dropped lox on the floor I thought it was cool, Ya know, that three second rule So I ate it Before someone had walked through the door I thought it was stable Near the edge of the table But it dropped off, When Mrs. Grable had suddenly sneezed But nothing got on it It just tilted her bonnet Thank goodness, luckily... Her nostrils were squeezed

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/15/2018 3:45:00 PM

Hello Charles Messina I love salmon i do not like lox. I enjoyed your poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina
Date: 7/16/2018 7:29:00 AM

Good Morning, Darlene. I find more people do like salmon and don't like lox...I just have to be different..lol Have a nice day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/15/2018 2:39:00 PM

... Good appetite ... I do not like salmon either ... and never met Betty Grabel ... thankfully :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina
Date: 7/16/2018 7:33:00 AM

LOL..I've tried it a dozen times...But flounder I can eat all week long! Thanks Sunshine! hugs // Charlie :)