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Achilles' Heel

In my armor instead he wore Now lays dead, my friend of honor Petroclus, Oh! The grief I bear Cannot be wiped away like tears. Long will I suffer his demise; Lost forever, our mortal ties. *************************** My lifelong friend lies before me His emaciated body Dressed in his “Best Mans” tuxedo He wore so many years ago as my best man in our wedding bearing our golden wedding rings. Oh! This human weakness: sorrow What claim you, all my tomorrows?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2011 7:06:00 AM
I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Albert. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2011 1:18:00 PM
very touching and eloquent
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Date: 3/23/2011 1:10:00 PM
Albert, I am so sorry for the loss of your friend, this poem is so sad yet it holds great beauty, you loved this man, your best man at your wedding, yes, we humans do have the weakness, sorrow, he lives forever in your heart~~
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