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Accusing Eyes

accusing eyes judge busy tongues wag-young virgin shy carries God’s Son ~*~ * * Note: #5 in a series of 24 Monokus reflecting the holy season of Christmas! * * * * *

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/12/2011 5:39:00 PM

I see what u had to do my friend.. this is dreadful but necessary I guess .. hope all will be well again soon my friend with luv..

David Smalling

Date: 12/10/2010 9:47:00 AM

It was not easy, but it was worth it ... my chains are gone. It is this freedom that enables to drink here where you serve thoughts like wine.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2010 4:43:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry today Audrey. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/9/2010 3:21:00 AM

Audrey, I love the meaning in this one.. You said it all in just one line.. brilliant, enjoy the day ahead.. love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2010 12:57:00 PM

Oh, good, back I come to your monoku series. Nice one, audrey. Now let me go see the ones I've missed!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/8/2010 10:53:00 AM

Very very thoughtful and meaningful write on the eyes that accused, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/8/2010 10:50:00 AM

Incredible monoku, dear!! You are filling us with Christmas spirit. Thanks so much, dear friend. Love, Carolyn