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The fish needs the anemone; the anemone, the fish The pollen needs to be the bumble bee’s most precious wish There’s fishes that frequent the mouths of huge man eating sharks There’s places where I walk my dog, where he, at nothing, barks The dragonfly leaps into flight, how does he know he can A dolphin will attack a shark… to save his fellow man???? A chick will clamber from an egg and when he’s fully grown He’ll fly five thousand miles to find a land he’s never known All of this is cool and yet defies all explanation So what on Earth created everything in every nation Coincidence or accident, the odds just made it so When mother nature’s dice were bad, she took another throw Do I marvel at the splendour of the stars or moonlit nights Do I smile when on a lavender a butterfly alights It’s truly hard to comprehend; to find a rationale For each astounding thing in this whole world - or this locale Some say it’s evolution and the rest say we should pray As though it’s Mother Nature or a god made things this way But nature plays a game of chance; things work or don’t last long I wonder at the notion that a god might get things wrong There’s negatives… volcanoes, earthquakes, famines and tornadoes I’d like to think a watchful god would save us all from those I know not who or what made planet blue ’pon which we live But when I see the truth my full allegiance I shall give For all the birds and all the bees and all the plants and all the trees Shall fill my heart with joy but shall not bring me to my knees And yet our science tells us that it started with a bang Which, some say, is as likely as, “Then all the angels sang.” But all of us - you, them and I - are mortal as that butterfly Will answers come the day we die, or will our souls lay down and cry Will we float into the light with no fears, needs nor appetites Or will we simply cease to be, with no more days and no more nights I gaze at all the wonders that form part of all that is And I don’t know if they are nature’s work or they are ‘his’ I envy those who have the faith; for me, I make this call How lucky have I been to witness all of this at all?

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Date: 7/19/2025 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. What a creative/wonderful write. Love the ending... Life for me started as a miracle. I should Not have been born. I love the chapter of JOB in the bible. I have seen many miracle over my life. I know God is real but each one needs to find that out. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win............
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2025 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. I don’t have any answers, so your faith is safe from any derogatory comments from me. Thanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 7/18/2025 11:44:00 PM
Brilliant choice of poem for POTW! Terry your poem is truly thought provoking and so well written. I relate to this poem and its questions as a person who is not sure if or what they believe! Really happy for you my lovely real and honest friend! Debx
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2025 5:34:00 PM
Thanks, Deb. It very nearly disappeared into the trash can of unfinished dross. But I felt there was something to work with, and, HEY PRESTO… wonderful comments such as yours. Glad you enjoyed…. But I’d sure like to find where I left my funny. I will find it, so… be afraid, be very afraid…….
Date: 7/17/2025 10:52:00 PM
The rhythm to this is what poetry is to me. Very beautiful and makes me want to read it; "I gaze at all the wonders that form part of all that is, And I don’t know if they are nature’s work or they are ‘his’" Absolutely lovely idk metric or rhyme professionally but this hums like a bird.
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/18/2025 11:56:00 AM
Thank you Beej. Considering I put this poem to one side, half done, I’m chuffed that having finally completed it, it has been so well received. Terry
Date: 7/16/2025 5:01:00 AM
returning with a hooray congratulations on your poem of the day!
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/18/2025 11:57:00 AM
Thanks, Sara. Appreciated
Date: 7/16/2025 4:39:00 AM
Love your pondering, Terry! No one sees something that is made and thinks it is just there as an accident. We have so many clues that tell us there is something more. How can we come from nothing and yet how are we here. Love your final line! Big congrts on POTW!!!
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/18/2025 12:03:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. My one big question about the Big Bang… is what went bang. Some say dust and gasses… so… where did the dust and gasses come from. My current pet theory is that ‘nothing’ as in ‘nothingness’ simply cannot exist. And that leads me to wonder……Gaaaarh…my head hurts!
Date: 7/14/2025 4:49:00 PM
I loved the flow and train of thought in your poem...some beautiful images as well. The last verse especially spoke to me...lots to ponder every day :-)
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/14/2025 5:03:00 PM
Nice to see you back, Sara. I have often contemplated the infinitesimal chance of any of us, as individuals, ever actually existing. Perhaps I’ll write a deeply philosophical opus on that one day, or…. maybe, just a Limerick. Terry
Date: 7/14/2025 2:10:00 AM
Wonderfully written potw Terry! Imaginative and clever! Congratulations on potw!
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Date: 7/14/2025 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Karen. Much appreciated. Terry
Date: 7/13/2025 9:52:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your poem receiving the honor of POTW! Excellent and well-deserved, Terry. Enjoy your week of recognition my friend. Bill
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/14/2025 3:54:00 PM
Thanks, Bill. I’ve struggled to write much of late, so this came as a welcome surprise. Terry
Date: 7/13/2025 4:23:00 PM
Hi Terry, nature is the perfect example of how things came to be. :) Looking at the beginning- in Gen 1:14, --Then God said, “Let there be lights in the expanse of the heavens to separate the day from the night, and they shall serve as signs and for seasons, and for days and years.-- So wonderful, indeed. God set things in motion. Anything bad is because of man and sin. My best to you and congratulations on Poem of the Week. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/14/2025 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy. None of us will know the absolute truth in our lifetimes; I guess that’s why unquestioning belief is called ‘faith’. Thanks for your congrats. Terry
Date: 7/13/2025 10:30:00 AM
Surely hits home with me Terry. Philosophical musings well-rhymed. ;);) A fav for me. Congratulations on recognition as POTW! :)
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Date: 7/13/2025 2:58:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Linda. Thanks for the fav. Terry
Date: 7/13/2025 5:57:00 AM
Terry, I enjoyed your poem. So well penned. Congratulations on POTW.
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Date: 7/13/2025 8:35:00 AM
Thanks, Tania. Much appreciated. Terry
Date: 7/13/2025 5:52:00 AM
Interesting choice for potw. Like Andrea, I'm 100% a believer in a benevolent Creator. Unlike many, I believe macro evolution to be a lie full of holes (where are all the fossils of species in transition?). I've studied the Bible intensely for over forty years and am convinced this book that has over five billion copies in circulation and has been translated in over three thousand languages is God's letter to us explaining how we got here, why we're here, where we're going.
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/13/2025 8:33:00 AM
I think all POTD and POTW are, in many ways, interesting choices, Tom. Seemingly, no one knows how they’re selected for the honour… I sure can’t figure it. I once had POTD (may have even been POTW… kinda rings a bell) with a poem about Jack and the beanstalk… featuring a Robin Reliant (a three wheeled car). I’ll happily accept the award but I’m in no doubt that there were plenty of others worthy or more worthy than my little ditty.. As for creation… The only thing I know for sure is “It is what it is” . Cheers Tom. Terry
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Date: 7/13/2025 5:54:00 AM
As far as the bad things that occur, it's because mankind chose independence from God, therefore as a whole this world falls under Satan's dominion. Hitler times a thousand. But not for much longer Terry. Enjoy your special week
Date: 7/13/2025 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations on having received poem of the week award Terry. An excellent write, we are all indeed lucky to have witnessed it all… Beryl
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/13/2025 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Beryl, and thank you for bringing POTW to my attention. Am I chuffed… you bet I am! Terry
Date: 7/9/2025 3:45:00 PM
I'm just thankful I got to play a small part in all of creation and I'm in awe of the genius that created it all. Awesome read, my friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your fine poetry. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/13/2025 8:21:00 AM
Thanks, Bill. Religion can be a contentious issue, so I consider my lines carefully, to avoid appearing to ridicule or question someone’s religion. I don’t know the answer to the question I pondered, and if someone, such as yourself, has faith, I’m not about to argue with you. Thanks so much for the fave, appreciated. Terry
Date: 7/9/2025 3:43:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Terry. The world and all that is, can be quite challenging to comprehend. I know you probably know that I'm one that has faith. I believe (all that is) was created by a creator ... by intelligent design. Even if it was a "Big Bang" I believe the Creator made it so. Even though man intelligent tests say I'm quite smart; I will never understand the mind of the Creator, I call God.
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Date: 7/8/2025 8:39:00 PM
OK. I think ALL of us can meet at the intersection of your last line. Wish it could be posted where everyone could see it. Sweet, Terry. Thanks a zillion, Gershon
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/13/2025 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Gershon. This was one of those poems that had no destination in my head. Wasn’t long before it found its path and became what it became. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 7/8/2025 4:19:00 PM
Love the ending you put on it. Many scientists once atheists finally came to the conclusion there had to be a creator. Of course there are are some who can't believe it either. However, I have thought about God and religion a lot in my lifetime. What really convinced me was hearing and seeing reenactments of near death experiences on different TV shows, etc. For example, girl blind from birth who left her body during surgery when her heart stopped. How she saw things for first time!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/9/2025 12:45:00 PM
why not call yourself agnostic? At least you have a little doubt. There can be evolution within the plan of the world's origin. I think it's foolish when religious people do not take evolution into account. However, I find it hard to accept man evolving from monkeys!
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/8/2025 4:24:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. If atheist is 0 and believer is 10, I guess I’m about a 2. I firmly accept ‘evolution’… I guess it’s the beginning that I question ;-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/8/2025 4:22:00 PM
Saw colors and could tell what she heard even though she was supposedly "under" Those who see God or the brilliant light all describe such incredible love that they don't want to return to their bodies. So many profound things. I don't believe in religion any more. The message in every culture is simply to love.
Date: 7/7/2025 2:06:00 PM
I don’t believe the universe started by accident or design Terry, all I do know is that it was inevitable and had to happen, Why? because we’re here! Some wonderfully crafted lines in this existential piece, yes there are on the surface what may appear negative natural disasters, but if the asteroid hadn’t wiped out the dinosaurs, chances are we wouldn’t have evolved, not yet anyway. A thought provoking well written poem, worthy of a fave, cheers David
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/7/2025 3:31:00 PM
Thanks David. Nice to see you back on these boards. Mind you, I’ve been absent, on and off, for a while now, so you could have been back for sometime. As I intimated to Ilene, This was one of many ‘going nowhere’ poems. Kept coming back to it as it was all I had that seemed to have something to work with. As such, I’m proper chuffed with a fave. Thanks for that. Terry.
Date: 7/7/2025 12:19:00 PM
I love these philosophical musings, Terry - what a pleasure to read them in perfect rhyme! I very much agree with your conclusion and especially like the line about being as mortal as the butterfly…
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/7/2025 12:29:00 PM
Struggling with inspiration for some time now, Ilene. This has been through so many incarnations, including a supposed ‘comic’ write which included, “Is one of us a butterfly?” That line became the “mortal” line. I actually had three further verses focused more upon the birds and beasts but I simply couldn’t squeeze them in anywhere that didn’t feel contrived. Perhaps I’ll write something to use them up. Glad you enjoyed
Date: 7/7/2025 9:27:00 AM
A verse of wisdom Terry, been absent for a while, been busy doing a slideshow for a forthcoming family reunion. All done now 572 slides later. On my travels again, greetings from Turkey. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/7/2025 11:45:00 AM
Thanks Tom. Enjoy Turkey. Terry

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