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Accepting Me

There are moments when l feel l don’t belong Not singing in tune to the right song Not dancing in time to the right beat Not walking straight with my two left feet When younger it bothered me Thought someone else l should be Now l know and love who l am I no longer give a damn !

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Date: 3/7/2024 1:35:00 AM
I love this ...... I relate to it... you brought me in and showed me myself.. through the eyes of your experiences. Darrell
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Date: 10/2/2023 10:59:00 PM
Good for you, Debx !
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Deb M
Date: 10/5/2023 2:34:00 AM
Its a good place to be….cheers Sam! Debx
Date: 9/30/2023 8:06:00 PM
I was born me That's me, The me I am supposed to be. You were born you, That's true, unique we two.
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Deb M
Date: 10/5/2023 2:33:00 AM
Nice lil rhyme there Shirley….thankyou my lovely friend! Debx
Date: 9/30/2023 2:49:00 PM
I love that last punch line to your poem. Some times it's hard to self-love but my spiritual teacher used to say that "charity begins at home". I think that was exactly what he meant.
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Deb M
Date: 9/30/2023 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Nancy…..my mum said similar “ christianity starts at home” were her words. Accepting ones self is not always easy but once you do that inner turmoil eases or disappears! I really appreciate your kind words Nancy…..Debx
Date: 9/27/2023 11:27:00 AM
Totally acceptable and accepted Deb; especially that last line ;-)
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Deb M
Date: 9/30/2023 2:57:00 PM
Im being playful Jeff hehe! Debx
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/30/2023 12:59:00 AM
Not intended. Sorry Deb
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Deb M
Date: 9/30/2023 12:33:00 AM
Haha thats funny and a lil bit RUDE Jeff!! Debx
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/27/2023 1:04:00 PM
Your comment on my nuts allowed me to look you up. Thanks Deb
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Deb M
Date: 9/27/2023 11:40:00 AM
Awww thanks Jeff! Appreciate your comment! Loved your Nuts poem ….funny! Debx
Date: 9/25/2023 9:58:00 PM
Hello, I am the President of the Canadian Beavers Association. We just wanted to say we loved your poem, we never give Damns, we work hard and to make them and sell them at a fair price, thank you for supporting us!
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:42:00 AM
Hehe you're funny Arthur!! Debx
Date: 9/25/2023 9:58:00 PM
And aside from my amazing wit and humor, loved the poem and sure can relate to it.
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:37:00 AM
Thankyou Arthur for the comment and for your amazing wit and humour! Debx
Date: 9/25/2023 11:18:00 AM
"To thine ownself be true" I like you just like you are, too, young lady:)
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:40:00 AM
Awww shucks Daniel….l like you too….now come back!! YLD x
Date: 9/25/2023 9:53:00 AM
That's right my friend. When I first started writing. I thought the world revolved around pleasing everybody. I quickly realized that no matter what I write, some will love it and some will hate it.
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:53:00 AM
My attitude for life in general Nowadays Jerry! Thanks my lovely new friend…lDebx
Date: 9/25/2023 1:46:00 AM
So true. Often I write a poem thinking the world is great, only to find it a flop. Seems my last poem is one of them. Hugs
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Deb M
Date: 9/26/2023 11:53:00 AM
Thankyou Victor! Debx
Date: 9/24/2023 1:05:00 PM
A good poem. Well written.
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Deb M
Date: 9/26/2023 11:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Jeanette…Debx
Date: 9/24/2023 12:42:00 PM
To quote the great George Benson lyric: "Learning to love yourself is the greatest love of all" The song came into my head as soon as I read your poem Deb. :) Cheers - Gary
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Date: 9/24/2023 12:50:00 PM
Thanks Gary….Debx
Date: 9/24/2023 12:41:00 PM
Hi Deb, I can relate to your words very much. It almost feels like I penned them myself. That last line rings so true in my life. Kudos to you for writing such a poem. It could be the turning point for someone sharing those same feelings. Excellent job. I adding to my fave list. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:58:00 AM
Great minds Alexis!! A fave is special Thankyou! Debx
Date: 9/24/2023 12:20:00 PM
I think many people go through this and I'm happy you are content with who you are.. always be true to oneself, regardless of the noise from those barking.. Nice read, Deb.
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Deb M
Date: 9/26/2023 11:57:00 AM
Thanks so much S.O….Debx
Date: 9/24/2023 12:15:00 PM
Hello Deb M. It is good that you love yourself. After all it is yourself. We must all love ourselves.\ Darlenex/ Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2023 3:13:00 PM
Hello Deb I also like you just the way you are.Have a greatr evening. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2023 3:10:00 PM
Hello Deb M. I hope all is well with you. You are welcome. /Darlenex/ Hugs.
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Deb M
Date: 9/26/2023 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Darlene….Debx
Date: 9/24/2023 11:53:00 AM
Most people worry too much what others might think of them. Your concept is the best! Good lines, Deb.
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:33:00 AM
Life is way too short for that Lin….Thankyou my dear friend….Debx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/25/2023 10:00:00 PM
Some are even happy she contests who she is LOL, sorry I am in humor mood as you can see!!!
Date: 9/24/2023 11:48:00 AM
This made me chuckle. Self love and acceptance we all learn if we are lucky early in life. Love this!
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:29:00 AM
Glad you got a chuckle Karen….thanks…Debx

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