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Abysmal Vacuity

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Written: February 25, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In a scene of singing sunlight. They claim it blurs our sight. Shall we dare gaze at the sky? Through dread, the stars fly. Stoking in a vacuum sway Beaming banners blare boldly. A pair of piranhas are plunging. It is superb, grasping a bright shine. Love's charm—how do you draw it in? It makes the task of daring thrilling. In my fearful forest, I fight forth. As eyes fry with frantic flutters. In this twisted yearning, I abhor. Yet, embrace insight with ease. Never linger in distress. Pondering peace without being alone. Under a moonlit night's shadow. Thaw flows glide as strings in a ballet. Words crumble amid stillness. Fighting a flourishing fear. Behind your silent mind. Mute menial mutters manifested. Crashing curtains once. Craving to roam free despite caution. Stripped yet surged by Sibylline. Serious sunlight speculation. It could be aggressive and harsh. Life is devoured without a swash. It all started with a raw sheet. As dunes, our tales might alter. A dichotomy of bravery and intimacy. In life's transient elixir Time sands and heroic melodies. We weave our myths. with untamed minds and brave hearts. The sun burns our fragile vision. Stars glide through the darkness of night. A sea of absence in their bright blaze. Intense and vivid as a crocodile swarm. Love and strength are a delightful test. In my dark woods, I stand firm. Yet your eyes wiggle with fever. Stirring a desire I loathe but crave. Predicting, a glove well-woven. I don it with hope and dread. Suffering from a wild yearning agony. Serving solace sans seclusion. Twists of gloom below the moon. When wind waltzes with woolen wires. Words wobble with weight of wrath. Silence deters us from soaring upward. And decry your vacuous diction Awaiting unfurled sheets. So anxious to be heard and set free. The draperies previously yielded. Fetching for freedom to flourish.

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Date: 2/29/2024 5:04:00 PM
A powerful poem, of passion for life and love and courage to stand firm and fight through the challenges as they attack your meaning in life and its purpose with vicious weapons of deception and gloom. Your poem had a good rhythm to it, my friend, and the alliteration within was pleasing to my ears as I read. Your vocabulary is a delicious alphabet soup. umm umm good. Thanks for sharing your poetic talents with us. Your friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/28/2024 5:00:00 AM
Life gives a mixed-pack of hopes, frustrations and fears. When we think of depicting life, words wobble with the wait of wrath. In joy, we see the twists of gloom. "As dunes, our tales might alter. A dichotomy of bravery and intimacy. In life's transient elixir Time sands and heroic melodies."Your vocabulary and lofty diction make the poem a little difficult for an ordinary poet like me to explicate. All the best, dear friend, if it is for a competition.
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Date: 2/26/2024 8:41:00 AM
What an impeccable write this is dr sotto! Those alliterations to the deeply profound metaphors and diction truly is mind blowing! And so well delivered! I absolutely loved the flow of this and what youve conveyed here in such a sumptuous manner! Youv phrased so many thoughts in a very intriguing manner, i especially loved “ singing sunlight” “ words crumble amidst stillness” “ twists of gloom below the moon” “ glove wll woven and so much more that is thought provoking and soulful! Loved this!
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Date: 2/26/2024 7:17:00 AM
It seems as though thinking, feeling, and life swirl all around us. You seem to have mastered it all. I read this in awe and feel very humble. I like the way you stand firm amidst all the challenges!
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Date: 2/26/2024 7:06:00 AM
Awesome pairing of words and phrases adorn this poetic journey, my friend. ---In life's transient elixir Time sands and heroic melodies---When wind waltzes with woolen wires Words wobble with weight of wrath--so well described, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/26/2024 4:42:00 AM
an outstanding poem, dearest Sotto. I felt the inner turmoil with various emotions...emotions amplified by your imagery. I liked these powerful lines: In my dark woods, I stand firm....Predicting, a glove well-woven. I don it with hope and dread. Your poem illustrates the complex dualties we all face, sometimes daily. I always enjoy the profundity of your words. Have a pleasant day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 2/25/2024 11:15:00 PM
Beautiful, this poem flows.
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Date: 2/25/2024 4:07:00 PM
Sotto, What a captivating poem filled with rich imagery and contrasting emotions. The vivid scene of sunlight and dread, piranhas and yearning, shows the internal conflict. You explore the complexities of love, desire, and fear with honesty, acknowledging the thrilling danger and the fight within the forest. You end with a powerful image of a glove donned with hope and dread, signifying the embrace of the unknown. It leaves a lasting impression, prompting introspection on the dualities we face in life. - Blessings, Daniel
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