Abuser If I Have My Way You'Re Already Forgiven

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Abuser  IF I HAVE MY WAY YOU'RE ALREADY FORGIVEN

I'm done being your doormat;
You've walked on me for the last time;
I'm not your personal lackey;
So you bully in school, U ain't cool
Ya wife abuser, it's U who are the loser
And if I had my way
If I had my way
I'd hug and forgive you today
And keep you in my prayers
You've spread your lies and your doubts;
Taunting and telling everyone your business;
I'm not your personal lackey;
So you bullying in group on line, U ain't cool
Ya abuser, it's U who are the loser
And if I had my way
If I had my way
I'd hug and forgive you today  
It hurts but I must forgive you in trust
So that God forgives me
This is how it must be
And if I had my way
If I had my way
I'd hug and forgive you today
And keep you in my prayers
Ya abuser, it's U who are the loser
And if I had my way
If I had my way
I'd hug and forgive you today  
So you creedant, you are forgiven



7/1/18
written words by James Edward Lee Sr.©2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/1/2018 6:40:00 PM
Very well written. I like the repeated use of forgiven. And to think, the woman probably prayed at one time to be that man's wife.
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Date: 7/1/2018 9:26:00 AM
I like your style. This one I like how you repeated some of the lines. It gave it more emphasis to the part of forgiving.
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