Abuser If I Have My Way You'Re Already Forgiven

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Abuser IF I HAVE MY WAY YOU'RE ALREADY FORGIVEN I'm done being your doormat; You've walked on me for the last time; I'm not your personal lackey; So you bully in school, U ain't cool Ya wife abuser, it's U who are the loser And if I had my way If I had my way I'd hug and forgive you today And keep you in my prayers You've spread your lies and your doubts; Taunting and telling everyone your business; I'm not your personal lackey; So you bullying in group on line, U ain't cool Ya abuser, it's U who are the loser And if I had my way If I had my way I'd hug and forgive you today It hurts but I must forgive you in trust So that God forgives me This is how it must be And if I had my way If I had my way I'd hug and forgive you today And keep you in my prayers Ya abuser, it's U who are the loser And if I had my way If I had my way I'd hug and forgive you today So you creedant, you are forgiven 7/1/18 written words by James Edward Lee Sr.©2018

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Janis Thompson

Date: 7/1/2018 6:40:00 PM

Very well written. I like the repeated use of forgiven. And to think, the woman probably prayed at one time to be that man's wife.

Bonnie House

Date: 7/1/2018 9:26:00 AM

I like your style. This one I like how you repeated some of the lines. It gave it more emphasis to the part of forgiving.